Third day, first snow
by Dietrich Gloger
Hi , so here's one to portray the start of the blizzard. See the snow-flakes in the bottom left.
I guess this is stronger than the last one, but what about the intruding branches on the right? I have no objections to cloning, but wanted to know if you find this distracting?
Thanks for your comments!
Dietrich
5D, 70-200@70mm, f/8.0, 1/8 sec. iso 50.
Processing: raw-conversion, color-balance, TK's masks. Increased contrast in the shadows (that emphasized the snow)
Comments
43 commentsI do feel the branches on the bottom right are just a bit distracting, I would attempt to clone them out and see how it feels.
I like how the branches facing the rain droplets. I wish that little branch in bottom right wasn't there..but all in all very very dramatic image.
Another great image! I would get rid of the branches in the bottom right as you mentioned. I think part of the appeal of this image is the way the detail of the left side fades off as the eye moves to the right... that branch takes from the experience in my opinion. Once that is gone, this is a real winner! You have a great eye for these type of shots!
Wayne
Loads of mood and the composition is good too.
The branches on the right don't bother me they may actually help to contain the image.
Now we're talkin' !! This is absolutely wonderful. The left half of the image is stunning, but the background right help complete the image - and for that, I don't mind the little branches in the lower right. Although a crop from the right would make for a wonderful alternate image.
Of course I wasn't there, but I'm guessing this particular comp wouldn't have worked under other, normal conditions as there would be too much competition between the background falls and the tree. But here, they are married beautifully. Oh, and I love the hint of color surrounding the falls in the background - yet another element that makes this image so beautiful.
This is gorgeous!
Lon
Pat
I have a few alternative compositions, this was not a hard comp. to "see" and find, but then hard to frame because of the intruder and other elements. I wanted the tree on the left and the trees in the bg, and the branches on the bottom. It took me a few iterations until it was right. Thanks also for the cropping-suggestions.
Wider would have been possible with the other lens, but the snow was very wet at the beginning and I was worried about the camera. I did not want to expose it too much to the weather.
Thanks!
Chris
Best regards