Posted by Marko Trebušak on November 29, 2013 at 12:17 AM
I'm offering this for you to tear apart. Actually I'm not convinced by this photo. Here is why: I like larches, I like mountains and I like the depth of the photo. I don't care for the geometry of the sun star and I'm not convinced by the sky.
Cheers,
Marko
Posted by keith mitchell on November 29, 2013 at 3:50 AM
Marko have not got a clue about landscape photography but I will try to study your points and look forward to what others say.
Keith.
Posted by Simon Litten on November 29, 2013 at 9:48 AM
I think the sun burst works fine but I think the two dark clouds pull you out of the scene though. A shot I'd still be pleased with though
Posted by Mike Smith on November 29, 2013 at 1:00 PM
Tricky one this, the natural leading lines of two the rear mountains lead you away from the sun to effectively nothing which is possibly why it doesn't quite work as a image?
I think it needs a bit more foreground interest to counterbalance this or a single dominating element
Posted by keith mitchell on November 30, 2013 at 3:22 AM
Marco when I looked at this there was something I was not sure about but I recon Simon got it with his comment re the dark cloud but I echo what he said about being pleased with it.I live and learn
Keith..
Discussion
4 repliesCheers,
Marko
Keith.
I think it needs a bit more foreground interest to counterbalance this or a single dominating element
Keith..