So Close... (+ Repost)

Gallery: LandscapePosted July 6, 20183,048 views8 comments

When I started planning my recent trip to the Grand Tetons I had visions of epic sunrises (and even the elusive sunsets) dancing in my head. Reality ended up being somewhat different. On this morning many of the ingredients were coming together for a beautiful sunrise. Unfortunately the light was ultimately blocked by clouds in the east. But that's ok. The clouds behind the peaks had interesting texture and I think work well in black and white.

In my last post I mentioned that I had set up for sunrise at a spot near the iconic location at Schwabacher's Landing. This is that shot. It was so close to a colorful sunrise, but in the end so far away. sad

As always all comments and critiques are welcome.

Capture Info:
32 mm
f/16 @ 0.3 sec. ISO 100

Processing Info:
The usual suspects: TK's luminosity masks and triple play actions.

Comments

8 comments

Comment posted by Doug Koepsel on July 6, 2018 at 9:24 PM

The snow on the peaks looks good. I like the slight vertical blur in the reflection. Temptation would be to try some tonal contrast in the clouds.

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Comment posted by Igor Doncov on July 6, 2018 at 9:37 PM

We have seen so many Teton images recently that the interest is starting to fade. And now this. There is something about b&w that adds to an image in no other way. This feels so alive somehow. From the sharp blades of grass to the bits of foam over the reflections. When an image is suitable for b&w it really sings. A real beauty imo. The old masters are still relevant.

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Comment posted by Philip Hodgkins on July 7, 2018 at 3:23 PM

I agree with both Doug and Igor. I think the image would be vastly improved with a broader range of tonal contrast, especially in the clouds. Easy to overdo, though.

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Comment posted by gary phillips on July 7, 2018 at 9:12 PM

The bones of this image are all there and is very good as presented. I agree with boosting the contrast overall. I think the whites in particular could brought up in both peaks and reflection. Obviously, it’s personal taste and could be overdone very easily. Looks like you had a great trip to a wonderful corner of the world.

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Comment posted by Brian Schrayer on July 7, 2018 at 11:02 PM

Here's a repost with a boost in contrast in the sky and reflection. Thanks everyone for the comments and suggestions!

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Comment posted by Marylynne Diggs on July 7, 2018 at 11:56 PM

Hi Brian,
The best laid plans....are really hard to carry out when nature gets in the way. I like the repost for the lifted whites. I would actually be inclined to suggest a more panoramic crop. The bubbles in the water distract me, and I find that cropping the bottom off just below the reflected peaks provides a sweeping water way into the image. It's worth exploring if you feel so moved.
ML

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Comment posted by Igor Doncov on July 8, 2018 at 1:20 AM

I guess I'm in the minority but I prefer the original. The distant foliage has lost some information and looks too dark for me. I do think the clouds have improved though.

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Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on July 9, 2018 at 4:22 PM

I think I stood in that very spot last fall. Looks like the contrast adjustment did the trick. Maybe darken the top edge a little, but minor. Nice rendition.

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