Comment posted by Ian Wolfenden on November 23, 2017 at 10:09 AM
I like the bright leaves against the sombre tones of the wall, Preston; you hope there might be a seat nearby to relax and gaze up at the variations in colour.
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Comment posted by Harley Goldman on November 25, 2017 at 4:16 PM
Nice structure and color. I might lose the brown leaf upper left. Hanging by itself color-wise, it tends to pull my eye to it. This works nicely.
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Comment posted by Lon Overacker on November 26, 2017 at 4:53 PM
Preston,
I like this a LOT. I have always been drawn to the old brick, especially when some interesting trees, structures, shadows, etc. are combined with. This works wonderfully.
I see Harley's point about the brown leaf. I think I would simply crop down from the top. I think it's the lower leaves, the trunks both interacting with the brick wall that interest me. Cropping some from the top doesn't hurt, and I think helps emphasize what is important.
Congrats in spying this little scene.
Lon
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3 commentsI like this a LOT. I have always been drawn to the old brick, especially when some interesting trees, structures, shadows, etc. are combined with. This works wonderfully.
I see Harley's point about the brown leaf. I think I would simply crop down from the top. I think it's the lower leaves, the trunks both interacting with the brick wall that interest me. Cropping some from the top doesn't hurt, and I think helps emphasize what is important.
Congrats in spying this little scene.
Lon