Gallery: LandscapePosted November 11, 20173,559 views7 comments
I captured this image during a lull between wind gusts on a blustery evening in a remote High Sierra basin in early September. Appreciate comments, critiques and/or suggestions.
5DSR, 16-35 f/4 ISL @ 16mm, .75 GND
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7 comments
Comment posted by Jim Zablotny on November 11, 2017 at 5:30 PM
Hi Dave,
I like the comp. The bands of bright light on the mountains look very nice. The color of the sky is very rich and vibrant. A little bit of haloing on the left side mountain top perhaps produced from the sharpening routines and can be dealt with before printing. Well done.......................Jim
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Comment posted by gary phillips on November 11, 2017 at 7:32 PM
The the diagonal flow of this image, Dave. Excellent color and detail throughout. The clouds bring a certain dynamism to this. There is one yellow flower poking into the frame bottom left. Real minor, beautiful image.
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Comment posted by Michael Lowe on November 12, 2017 at 2:28 AM
Love the comp with the main sunlit mountain off center to the left drawing my eye through the image to the distant mountains and those "to die for" clouds.
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Comment posted by Harley Goldman on November 12, 2017 at 9:30 AM
Another excellent high country image. I would agree with Gary about the yellow flower on the bottom edge. Beautiful sky and general alpine scene. It was a productive backpacking season for you!
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Comment posted by Lon Overacker on November 12, 2017 at 1:07 PM
Dave,
Yet another gorgeous alpine landscape - with beautiful light and dynamic conditions. Initially I was thinking that because of the long band of light and length of some of the clouds, this might be cool looking cropping up some from the bottom for a more pano look. But then, the greens at the bottom add so much and this is quite well balanced as presented.
I especially like the open view of the distant peaks as well. Gives this image great depth.
Very little to nitpick here. I would agree with nixing the little yellow flower - but only a minor cleanup for printing. Otherwise, this looks masterful.
Lon
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Comment posted by Ed Lowe on November 12, 2017 at 2:07 PM
Looks like you came away with several wonderful images from your back packing trip, Dave. I really like the color combinations in this scene with the blue/gold in the upper half and the green/magenta in the bottom. This has a wonderful depth to it along with some great light and clouds. Keep them coming.
Ed
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Comment posted by Bo Chen on November 14, 2017 at 8:08 PM
I like the obvious diagonal composition, very dynamic. The moving clouds emphasize it.
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7 commentsI like the comp. The bands of bright light on the mountains look very nice. The color of the sky is very rich and vibrant. A little bit of haloing on the left side mountain top perhaps produced from the sharpening routines and can be dealt with before printing. Well done.......................Jim
Yet another gorgeous alpine landscape - with beautiful light and dynamic conditions. Initially I was thinking that because of the long band of light and length of some of the clouds, this might be cool looking cropping up some from the bottom for a more pano look. But then, the greens at the bottom add so much and this is quite well balanced as presented.
I especially like the open view of the distant peaks as well. Gives this image great depth.
Very little to nitpick here. I would agree with nixing the little yellow flower - but only a minor cleanup for printing. Otherwise, this looks masterful.
Lon
Ed