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Sierra Classic II +crop

by Lon Overacker

Gallery: LandscapePosted October 28, 201711,044 views14 comments
I'm trying to think of how many, if any images I've seen of Aspen over a flowing stream.  I chase these scenes frequently with dogwood over the Merced in Yosemite... but I can't recall having shot this myself.

This one was interesting to process.  I did capture a number of frames with the intent of trying to focus stack.  It's taken me a while to learn and get this.... but focus stacking doesn't work all the time. Most especially with moving parts - like blowing leaves and moving water. :-(  So after a few failed attempts at that I resorted to a manual blend.  So there are two images, one for the tree and leaves, the second for the rocks and water at the bottom.  Of course the water movement changed between frames.  I hope the blend looks ok.

As always, would love to hear your comments, critique and feedback.

Thanks!

Lon

Comments

14 comments
Comment posted by Ed Lowe on October 28, 2017 at 3:50 PM
You have probably started a trend here with the aspen, Lon. The poor dogwood will probably be relegated to an afterthought. cool Seriously though this is beautifully done as the blend looks pretty seamless to me and your SS choice has created some wonderful details in the water. No suggestions from me.

Ed
Registered on February 7, 2004, 414 Posts, 7115 Comments
Comment posted by Brian Schrayer on October 28, 2017 at 4:12 PM
Lon, the blend looks good to my eye.  The composition also looks good and frames the rocks and the cascades nicely.  Beautifully done!
Registered on May 28, 2004, 114 Posts, 2890 Comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on October 28, 2017 at 5:21 PM
You did a fine job on this, Lon. The blend looks really well done. The color looks great, and the water flow has plenty of nice texture. My only suggestion would be to clone out the rock in the very upper left corner. Other than that, this is really fine work!
--P
Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on October 28, 2017 at 5:30 PM
This turned out really well. Blend looks great to my eye. It must have been tedious to manually blend it. I would agree with Preston's suggestion on the clone. You are a trend setter, both in photography AND fashion!

 
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on October 28, 2017 at 5:58 PM
Very nice image. I prefer the lower part a lot more than the upper. The water, boulders, and that single branch hanging over the water is really special. However, I can't come up with a crop that wouldn't require significant cloning at the upper border of the frame.

I really can't come up with good suggestions on the current image. The large rock, top left center, looks a bit awkward peeking through the foliage but that's being picky and it may not be true at all.
Registered on November 22, 2014, 189 Posts, 2733 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Leggett on October 28, 2017 at 8:06 PM
Lon, I can only imagine the challenges of focus stacking such a scene, so I'm not likely to attempt it. I like your choice of SS to get the water texture. composition is excellent, and the glow of the warm light on the bedrock against the yellow is superb. A fine capture.
Registered on July 21, 2004, 706 Posts, 3233 Comments
Comment posted by Eva McDermott on October 29, 2017 at 12:43 AM
This works for me on many levels Lon.  The focus is spot on for the leaves and rocks.  The shutter speed you have chosen for the water motion works well.
Registered on January 4, 2009, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on October 29, 2017 at 12:54 AM
Thanks for the comments and suggestions!  Seems a consensus on rocks up top - not just the one in the ULC, but also the bigger one up top.  I think Igor's concern about a messy crop was a valid one, but I think i found one that is decently clean.  Here is a cropped version.  I also made a few subtle edge adjustments where some of the white water merged with the edge.

I also wanted to mention the blend. Nothing tedious about the blend, it was actually very basic.  If you look close, you'll notice the rock and the water below the level of the big rock is more focused/sharp.  The water above that  line is soft and not in focus.  I combined two frames, but it was as simple as one half being the sharper leaves up top, and the sharp rock at the bottom.  I'll include a simulated mask to follow.

Thanks for your thoughts and suggestions!  I too really like the rocks and water at the bottom of the frame - the aspens leaves, nice color accent... ;-)

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on October 29, 2017 at 12:56 AM
Here's a screenshot of the layer mask similar to the one I used on the original master file (I had flattened all that, so I had to repeat from original RAW)
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on October 29, 2017 at 7:38 AM
The cropped version works, but I prefer the original composition, even with the rocks in it. For me, it is the space between the upper leaves and the edge that does it in the original. For my money, I would clone the upper rock and call it very nicely done. YMMV (money, not mileage). 
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on October 29, 2017 at 12:44 PM
Lon, This is very nice! I have always enjoyed your shot with branches and leaves over the water and I especially like the aspen leaves. I like the comp of the original with a bit more room around the leaves. The one rock doesn't really bother me much but it would be nicer without it. Very nice!

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI.
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Ed Cordes on October 29, 2017 at 8:53 PM
This is strikingly wonderful!  The blend of images is first rate and the colors really pop.  Well done.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 451 Posts, 3366 Comments
Comment posted by Mattia Oliviero on October 30, 2017 at 4:45 AM
I like both versions, Lon. But I do prefer the second which is more direct and more effective. I like the colors and especially the light on the rocks at the bottom, really gorgeous in the large version.
Registered on August 24, 2016, 43 Posts, 254 Comments
Comment posted by Rudy Ruberti on October 30, 2017 at 8:12 PM
This is really nice and I like the cropped version that removals part of the diagonal branch in the upper right hand corner.  The blend looks good, but I wonder why you needed to blend images, unless to maintain the SS for the water.
Registered on October 28, 2008, 179 Posts, 1875 Comments