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David

by Igor Doncov

Gallery: LandscapePosted May 17, 201710,708 views15 comments
One of my first images taken with the 6D, I recently converted this to B&W and now it's presentable. This was shot at Olmsted Point in late afternoon. I remember walking completely around this tree, deciding which perspective showed it's character the best. I finally chose to shoot it up close and upward to magnify the trunk and give it a 'crown'.

This type of image harkens back to an earlier era when I admired photographers who shot images like this. I was trying to capture an expressive form.

Canon 6D, 24-105mm@24mm, f/13, ISO 800, 1/500sec, tripod

I believe I used a tripod on this image but the settings suggest that I didn't. 

Thank you for all your comments on the last image. Yes, the three ducks have to go.

Comments

15 comments
Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on May 17, 2017 at 8:02 PM
The sweep of the trunk and angle that you chose give it a sense of grandeur.  Nice detail in the trunk and tonality too. The cloudless top of the sky works well here, letting the shape avoid an competition. Wouldn't change anything.
Registered on September 17, 2010, 304 Posts, 3507 Comments
Comment posted by Dan Kearl on May 17, 2017 at 8:09 PM
If you could have gotten a less steep angle, I think I would prefer it.
Just a tad to keep the tree above the horizon.
Other than that, nice B & W.
Registered on September 2, 2013, 209 Posts, 1514 Comments
Comment posted by SandyRichardsBrown on May 18, 2017 at 2:01 AM
Exquisite image! Not the tiniest nit from me -
devil
Sandy
Registered on November 24, 2003, 3937 Posts, 12909 Comments
Comment posted by Craig Moreau on May 18, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Igor, I like this interesting perspective. I also like the fringe of light on the outermost edges of the tree. Tonal range looks great to me as well.

I'm not sure how I feel about the lean of the tree, however I know that these different perspectives are hard to read for what is level. If it were mine, I would try it with the trunk completely vertical, though that may look terrible, I don't know.
Registered on April 21, 2015, 64 Posts, 584 Comments
Comment posted by Daniel Rappaport on May 18, 2017 at 12:43 PM
Really arresting portrait.  The perspective creates a certain tension that really works well. I agree that the lack of clouds behind the crown is ideal.
Registered on September 9, 2009, 294 Posts, 2006 Comments
Comment posted by Kathy Barnhart on May 18, 2017 at 1:28 PM
This is a classic beauty, both the image and the tree. I like the B and W treatment with its wide range of tones. It really evokes that part of the Sierras, and puts my feet right down on the granite. I love the upward look; it does give it a regal feeling. Excellent!
Registered on November 11, 2011, 404 Posts, 1639 Comments
Comment posted by Igor Doncov on May 18, 2017 at 2:07 PM

I love the upward look; it does give it a regal feeling

Thank you for that observation. I titled it David after Michelangelo's David. It reminds of his full head of hair. The early photographers, it seems to me, often shot trees suggesting human forms. Since that was during the Hollywood's golden era I started to see this tree as a Hollywood film star with glorious furs draped across her shoulders and along her arms. But what title was appropriate? Heddy Lamar ("That's Hedley!!"). I couldn't come up with a good one - so, it's David.
 
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Comment posted by Lon Overacker on May 18, 2017 at 5:59 PM
Igor,

And I was going with "David and Goliath..." but see your comment regarding the title.  And this is an image that can demand a title. Of course for my thought to work, I think the title would be Goliath, not David. angel

I used to teach composition at the Parks Dept years back.  One of the very basics is learning the difference between choosing a vertical format vs. horizontal.  I know this is rocket science, but your image exemplifies what your choice of format and perspective is so suited for this subject.  Kathy wrote, "I love the upward look; it does give it a regal feeling..."  Exactly. Regal, grand, towering, strength, dominating presence, bold, powerful; these are all things that can describe this regal tree. 

I think the composition is spot on and I love the space the tree occupies, it's shape and presence.

On a processing note, If I had a nit/suggestion it would be to tone down some of the highlights. In particular there's the brightest vertical streak in the trunk, but also a few of the granite boulders seem nearly washed out.  Granted, very hard to judge in these web versions, and also the exposure is appropriate for the light.

Still, I like this very much.  A grand portrait indeed.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on May 19, 2017 at 11:23 AM
Going b&w and your pov sure do make this an impressive looking tree, Igor.  It definitely has an 50's, large format presence.
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on May 20, 2017 at 3:28 PM
Nice portrait of a stately tree! I would clone out the background tree on the right of the trunk just above the ridge. This image works well for me. 
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Comment posted by gary phillips on May 21, 2017 at 12:58 AM
Very nice, Igor.  I agree with Harley that the little bit of canopy peaking thru on the right side of the trunk could be removed.  I also agree with Lon, that some of the highlights could be burned.  I like your decision on the perspective, and I also like that it doesn't look over processed.  Well done.
Registered on October 24, 2013, 185 Posts, 4136 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on May 21, 2017 at 2:58 PM
Igor, Very nice work setting up this composition and I'm very much enjoying this scene...great view angle! The b&w looks great with this image as well. An impressive b&w image.

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI.
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by D.A. Edwards on May 22, 2017 at 5:42 PM
Just a classic Yosemite monochrome image, Igor. I can't find anything to critique, really enjoying it as presented.
Registered on October 8, 2014, 226 Posts, 1187 Comments
Comment posted by John Williams on May 25, 2017 at 12:43 AM
I love the way the dark foliage stands out against the gray sky. Nice "retro" Igor!
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Comment posted by Michael Bjornbak on June 4, 2017 at 11:12 PM
Igor:
I love the image and also really like your quote. I definitely am going to work on being more interesting. 
Thanks for sharing your b/w image,
Michael
Registered on May 13, 2017, 17 Posts, 23 Comments