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Least Bittern/redo
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Least Bittern/redo

by Barbara Graham

Gallery: AvianPosted April 2, 2017270 views8 comments
Gainesville, Florida
4/1/2017 – 8:02:03 AM, foggy/cloudy
Canon EOS 7D EF400mm f/5.6L USM
1/200 sec;   f/5.6;   ISO 640
Manual;   Evaluative metering
LR5, PS6, Topaz DeNoise on everything but the bird and the reeds surrounding the bird, Curves to lighten the bird and the reeds around the bird, Smart Sharpen separately on the reeds and the bird, 76% of full frame.

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you!

Comments

8 comments
Comment posted by Hans Overduin on April 2, 2017 at 3:05 PM
The pose is priceless, and oh so typical for these birds. The whole image has some artistic feel to it, which I like ! Nice work cool. Cheers, Hans
Registered on August 31, 2011, 491 Posts, 3807 Comments
Comment posted by Dennis Plank on April 2, 2017 at 3:32 PM
Very cool, Barbara. I'm still hoping to get one of these down here in Texas.  Just missed one last week that other people were watching while I was shooting a pair of ducks 30 feet away.  I'd be tempted to bring the brightness of the whole image up a bit to get the water to show a bit better.
Registered on January 28, 2008, 1767 Posts, 23192 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Ditch on April 2, 2017 at 6:41 PM
Nice pose - the eyes of this species always pull me in.

There's a bit of strangeness in the appearance of the reeds behind the bittern, and of the edge of the bittern's back that might be form either the selection you made or the noise reduction you applied.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1031 Posts, 12705 Comments
Comment posted by David Schoen on April 2, 2017 at 7:45 PM
The detail comes through much better in the larger image but I do agree that lightning it up would be beneficial.  I've never seen one of these.  I like the pose and the head turn.
Registered on November 6, 2006, 1213 Posts, 4587 Comments
Comment posted by Barbara Graham on April 2, 2017 at 8:49 PM
Richard, I was horrified when I looked at this again in actual pixels.  And, Dennis and David, that's related to the fact that I darkened the water instead of brightening it.  The water is really messy.  I removed white spots, and I also tried to make some other clean-up type changes.  How I missed the end effect of those changes I don't know. 

So now I've had to clean up the clean-up, thus making this image have way too much "hand work" in it, and I'm going to post a redo here, but what I really need to do and will do is start over from the beginning and do a repost at some point.  So I did lighten the bird and reeds again, but the water lightening will have to wait until then.

My apologies to everyone.
Registered on July 27, 2010, 1310 Posts, 5035 Comments
Comment posted by Keith Bauer on April 2, 2017 at 9:37 PM
Very cool pose.  I like that very much.  The processing is off.  Your repost is an improvement but you still have a color cast.  I applied a curves adjustment layer after finding the white and black points in the image.  Here's the result.
Registered on November 20, 2003, 458 Posts, 4836 Comments
Comment posted by Barbara Graham on April 2, 2017 at 9:42 PM
Keith, that is SO MUCH better.  Thank you.
Registered on July 27, 2010, 1310 Posts, 5035 Comments
Comment posted by Charles Gangas on April 3, 2017 at 10:44 AM
I'd love to have an image of this species so out in the open as this Barbara- a very difficult bird to find.
Registered on August 12, 2009, 544 Posts, 2414 Comments