Adrift
by Harry Lichtman
I spent a couple of days paddling along the Androscoggin River on the NH / ME boarder th past fall. The most peaceful and beautiful waterways I have paddled yet. I leveled the image using the water line on the rock vs. the edge of the marsh which was curving away.
Nikon D810, 80-400mm @135mm, f22, 1/20th sec.
Comments
14 commentsA terrific explosion of autumn color. The broken reflection is wonderful with the lily pads and reeds; but for me, I don't think this image is about symmetry so much as it is about color and the reality of the upper half. My thought would be a slight crop off the bottom - say to above the first row of lily pads. Not that I want to reduce the reflection, but make this less symmetrical and have the reflection compliment, rather than compete with the top. Hope that makes sense - and a nitpicky suggestion as it is. ;-)
The only other comment I'm having trouble formulating, but have boiled it down to contrast. It's almost like this is a little to hard on the contrast. It's not a sharpening thing like a couple of posts ago. The colors are bold and beautiful and I think the saturation is in check. Just something, and I can only pin it on contrast. And I short on suggestions on what to change. this is also very nit picky, but an observation none the less.
I do really enjoy this image and I think the rock/reflection anchors the scene nicely.
Hope my comments made sense!
Lon
Lon, I do see what you are saying. I have been trying to apply minimal contrast, if any during RAW processing for these images that have lots of fine detail for the web - seems to be problematic. This scene was low contrast, even lighting to begin with. The images appear larger here on NPN at 100% screen size as compared to on my laptop at 100%, which means a bit more choppy on NPN than on my monitor on PS. Not sure why that would happen. The sharpening / choppiness for some of my images seems to be a relatively recent thing, as my web sharpening techniques haven't changed much.
I love this one from you, and the large version is much better imho. I am not sure what is going on with the contrast/choppiness issue, but it I have noticed in some fo you images as you have mentioned. It is minor stuff on here because I know a print would look fantastic from you.
The entire scene has so much interest from front to back, and those colors are divine. Excellent Autumn scene bro!!!!