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by Harry Lichtman

Gallery: LandscapePosted January 6, 2017241 views10 comments
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I bailed early toward the end of a backpack trip this past July in CA Trinity Alps due to oppressive heat around 100 deg., even at 7,000 ft.  I am not a warm weather person, and the solo trip meant I was hauling everything.  There was rarely a cloud in the sky, and I remember scouting for objects of shade such as a boulder or tree to stop and drink.  I decided to escape the heat and headed for the coastal fog and redwoods for some relief.  The weather was much more to my liking.  No great foggy conditions,but a beautifully peaceful experience none the less.  Saw very few other hikers along the trails of Prairie Creek State Park in northern CA where this was taken.

I saw this as more of a BW interpretation - though it simplified the scene more.  Maybe still a bit too busy though a larger print might allow a viewer to make sense of all of the details.  It amazes me how much detail and dynamic range these camera sensors can grab in 1/6 of a sec.

Curious if you all think it is too busy.  

Nikon D810, 16-35mm, polarizing filter, ISO 200  2 exposures, one general exposure, and another to control flare/contras

NOTE:  Both versions appear a bit less sharp than the files do prior to upload, but I'm hesitant to sharpen more for fear of overdoing it.  I've increased the sharpening more than usual as is, don't want it too crunchy.  Sorry about that.

A more appropriately sharpened version can be found HERE

Comments

10 comments
Comment posted by Dave Dillemuth on January 6, 2017 at 11:29 AM
This is outstanding. The tree trunks work as leading lines drawing my eye to the sun star.  The fringe of ferns along the bottom work great to frame the comp. I think the composition is excellent.
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Comment posted by Michael Lowe on January 6, 2017 at 11:41 AM
Love the image itself, Harry, but to me it looks very over sharpened, esp. the larger version.
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Comment posted by gary phillips on January 6, 2017 at 12:37 PM
I don't think it's too busy, and I like it as a mono presentation.  I might suggest a crop off the top to eliminate the three trunks coming in from the top left.  It makes the comp a bit less dizzying for me.  It also removes the open sky which isn't adding anything.  
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Comment posted by Igor Doncov on January 6, 2017 at 1:08 PM
Interesting perspective. Most people shoot straight up. I guess you can do this with a 16mm lens. It's unique and therefore interesting. I like the large opening showing the sky. Nicely done.
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Comment posted by Harry Lichtman on January 6, 2017 at 2:11 PM
Michael - I  had uploaded a less sharpened version initially  and it looked too soft, so I sharpened a bit more for this. Doesn't look over sharpened prior to upload.  Did the link give you any better results? Just curious as it looks better to me.
 
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Comment posted by Michael Lowe on January 6, 2017 at 4:11 PM
Harry, the linked version looks best to me, sharpening wise. But allow me to walk back my initial impression of the posted shots. I think I was possibly just overwhelmed with all the detail and contrast between light and shadow.
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Comment posted by Aaron Feinberg on January 6, 2017 at 9:03 PM
Def super busy....almost like a Rorschach?  Glad you got to escape that heat...doesnt sound like fun at all. :P
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Comment posted by Lon Overacker on January 7, 2017 at 2:50 PM
Harry,  this is fantastic!  I think the b&w does help simplified an otherwise very detailed and busy scene.  I think the nature of this particular scene, all the fine details of ferns, trunk detail and all the fine branches and needles, that this one was going to be a challenge in the sharpening department.  I would agree the posted and larger view to me look a bit over sharpened.  I think the 500px version nails it a bit better.

I just love the comp here.  It's in between a standard landscape view - ie. ground view (including the ferns) and the classic "look straight up view."  You've got both in one frame. I think having the ferns at the bottom and the patch of sky up top really does a fantastic job of capturing the essence of the redwood forest.  well done!

Lon
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Comment posted by Ryan Shain on January 8, 2017 at 7:36 PM
Hi there harry,

I find this image to be most fascinating, and I really enjoy all the details in the image along with the deep in the forest feel of your composition. I like the suggestion by Gary to crop a bit from the top, as I feel it helps the comp for myself. Really nice work to make the best of the situation, and I am glad you found some relief from the heat. I can relate as I am not a warm weather guy either.

Sweet work and conversion
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Comment posted by Chris Chamberlain on January 11, 2017 at 11:50 PM
The b&w, the light, the perspective, all awesome!
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