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Repo of Algodones Dunescape #1
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Repo of Algodones Dunescape #1

by Marylynne Diggs

Gallery: LandscapePosted May 21, 20162,972 views25 comments
I'm processing about a half dozen or so new dunescapes that I plan to share here over the next few weeks.  All of these were taken this Spring in the Algodones Dunes area near the Salton Sea in California.  The trip was part vacation (with morning at a date farm, afternoon at Salvation Mountain, and early evening only in the dunes). The dunes have two parts: one an active OHV area, one a wilderness area.  We only had time to access the more heavily used areas near the road.

This image was one of the first that I took.  I did not use any particularly creative techniques in post, just some contrast, etc.  The clouds made some dunes look black, others the more typical buff.  I'm interested in whether the effect is sufficiently engaging and, as usual, I'm eager for any feedback and suggestions you all might have. 

Canon 5D3 with 24-105mm at 90mm
ISO 125, f/11, 1/640s

Comments

25 comments
Comment posted by Doug Koepsel on May 22, 2016 at 9:50 AM
I am liking how the shaded dune stands apart from the other less defined dunes.  There are some small black spots on the dunes that you might consider cloning out.  The image is simple and eye-catching to me- nice.
 
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Comment posted by Igor Doncov on May 22, 2016 at 10:54 AM
I really like this very much, Marylynne. Especially with that black frame. I, personally, have never seen this rendition of the dunes and it's particularly refreshing. It reminds me of a far east pen and ink painting. It's elegant and spiritual. The fact that it's all done in light tones of the same hue is what makes it. It's simplicity and yet full of meaning. The shades of sand on the left are particularly appealing but I wouldn't change the right. The long horizontal format is perfect for this subject giving the viewer a sense of peace. Absolutely beautiful!
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Comment posted by Ian Wolfenden on May 22, 2016 at 11:35 AM
This has for me a slightly surreal feel, which I like.  The gaps in the dunes rather set one's imagination going !
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Comment posted by Louis Pattis on May 22, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Great take, the shadow is key and provides this image with a lot of impact, the only thing I would like to see is a little more headroom above the dark dune.
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Comment posted by D.A. Edwards on May 22, 2016 at 2:08 PM
One of the more unique dune images I've ever seen, Marylynne. Very artistic and impactful. I agree with Igor's take on the far easterness of your work here.
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Comment posted by Roel Wijtmans on May 22, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Wow, that is some remarkable effect that you captured here! Really intriguing. I think this is one of those rare instances where I would consider doing some cloning, and that would be removing the couple of black dots. That would add to the abstract character of this photo. Really great!
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Comment posted by Marylynne Diggs on May 22, 2016 at 2:30 PM
Thanks, folks.  I cloned out a few bigger spots but missed a few. I'll repost a revision later today, but first:  does it need mire space at the top or less at the bottom.  I was torn about that.  Above the current top of frame, we get into more shrub,etc.  I coild do an even flatter pano?
ML
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Comment posted by Stephen Stanton on May 22, 2016 at 3:49 PM
This is a very unique image,Marylynne,  other than cleaning up a few more dark flecks and specks, I would not do anything more. You have some beautiful soft shadows The image has a wonderful spirit.    
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Comment posted by Ed Lowe on May 22, 2016 at 4:09 PM
This is flat out gorgeous, Marylynne. The soft tones are particularly striking, imparting a beautiful sense of tranquility on this scene. I also like the lack of scale in the image further adding to it's mystique. My only suggestion would be to clone out those couple of black spots in the dunes. Great job on this beauty.

Ed
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Comment posted by Brian Schrayer on May 22, 2016 at 5:57 PM
This is interesting - I find myself wondering what is creating the dark shadow on the dune.  It certainly adds a lot of visual interest to the scene.  The panoramic format works very well here as well. 
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Comment posted by Harley Goldman on May 22, 2016 at 6:02 PM
Beautiful very sensuous image. I could see adding some to the top, but if it adds in bushes, then no. Maybe clone in a little? Either way, very minor to the overall image.  Excellent unusual take on the dunes. 
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Comment posted by scott lanz on May 22, 2016 at 9:10 PM
Love the unique, abstract look of this dunescape, Marylynne. Outstanding image.  
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Comment posted by Marylynne Diggs on May 22, 2016 at 10:09 PM
Thanks for the feedback, everyone.  I really appreciate the suggestions and the encouragement.  Here is a redo of the same image, with more specs remove and more headroom.  Let me know if it is an improvement.

I'll also upload a few others: one is a crop slightly to the left of this one, and the other, for your perspective, is the full view of the scene.  I think the unique shading is the perfect correspondence between the layers of dunes and the layers of clouds (which, perhaps not so coincidentally) seem to streak and parallel the dunes.  I guess the winds that built the dues also shape the clouds.

 
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Comment posted by Marylynne Diggs on May 22, 2016 at 10:10 PM
Here is the view slightly to the left.  I shifted the color temp a bit more, so holler if you like that better.  To me, it pushes the natural color possibilities too far.  I also think the full scope of the intersecting hills to the left distract from the main black hill, but perhaps they add more interest?
 
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Comment posted by Marylynne Diggs on May 22, 2016 at 10:14 PM
At the risk of over-posting, here is the full, wide-angle view from the parking area, unprocessed (and underexposed). 
ML
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Comment posted by Igor Doncov on May 23, 2016 at 2:14 AM
For me it's a hard decision between the original post and the first repost. But I think I still prefer the original. Yes, definitely. Having it less centered is more visually intriguing.

BTW, I'm impressed on how you were able to see this image from the large expanse of dunes. Especially with shadows moving continuously as you set up the camera.
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Comment posted by Kah Kit Yoong on May 23, 2016 at 5:53 AM
Love the soft shapes and subtle light play among those dunes. The panoramic composition works well for me.
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Comment posted by Ronald Murphy on May 23, 2016 at 8:14 AM
This is great! I prefer the original composition, but with the added top. The large version is a must-see.
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Comment posted by Richard Teller on May 23, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Nice simple composition. I like the light, texture and lines. 
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Comment posted by Roel Wijtmans on May 23, 2016 at 11:48 AM
First repo is the winner for me! Second repo is really, really nice too, but does not work as well as the other one. Such a great photo!
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Comment posted by gary phillips on May 23, 2016 at 1:45 PM
The first repost for me.  I love the lack of texture and subtle outlines of the dunes produce a dreamlike feel that is really appealing. Very cool.
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Comment posted by Ian Cameron on May 24, 2016 at 6:19 AM
Yes love it Marylynne. The shading is delicate and the contrast low and it creates a very pleasing image look forward to seeing more.
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Comment posted by Marylynne Diggs on May 27, 2016 at 12:34 AM
Thanks for the EP!!
 
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Comment posted by John Williams on May 27, 2016 at 8:23 AM
Fascinating image Marylynne. The textures (or lack thereof) and contrasts are eye-grabbing, and the shadows really set if off. Congrats on the EP!devil
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Comment posted by SandyRichardsBrown on May 27, 2016 at 1:04 PM
Congrats on the EP - stunning work!
Sandy
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