Comment posted by Brian Murphy on April 3, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Nice photo John,
I like the bokeh, the branch does a nice job of framing the robin. The textures and colors almost look like an art photo.
Nice job,
Brian
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Comment posted by Cay-Uwe Kulzer on April 9, 2016 at 3:55 AM
John,
all over I find the image pretty nice, like the pose of the robin and the clean background. I do also like the branch at the background. From composition point of view I may have tried a less centered placement of the bird, more to the left, which may have eliminated that "negative space" at that area as well.
Technically the exposure is fine, although I feel it is a bit soft.
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Comment posted by Jim DeWitt on April 18, 2016 at 12:34 PM
My only quibble is with the composition; if you gave the Robin more virtual room to look in to on the right, it would be a strong photo,; centering the subject rarely works. And the framing effect from the branch might be improved.
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3 commentsI like the bokeh, the branch does a nice job of framing the robin. The textures and colors almost look like an art photo.
Nice job,
Brian
all over I find the image pretty nice, like the pose of the robin and the clean background. I do also like the branch at the background. From composition point of view I may have tried a less centered placement of the bird, more to the left, which may have eliminated that "negative space" at that area as well.
Technically the exposure is fine, although I feel it is a bit soft.