Basque Sunset
by Alberto Patiño
Aguerreberry Point, one of my favorite sunset spots in Death Valley. March 2015.
Zuiko Digital 7-14mm, Olympus E-5, ISO 200, 1/80 sec at f/5 (too windy for tripod).
Comments welcome - better large (as in full resolution)!
Comments
9 commentsThe large version is a bit soft - even looks like motion blur on the fg gravel and plants, while the bg seems more sharp. Can't figure how that happened from camera shake, however - maybe a focusing issue?
Beautiful sweeping view. I like your placement of the foreground sage which adds nice depth. I might be tempted to crop a sliver off the sky just below that bright cloud as I find it pulls my eye to the edge of the frame.
Albert Darmo
Canada
--P
I think this works much better compositionally than you previous image; the foreground is clearly important here and makes for a great anchor and launching point, so to speak, to the rest of the expansive view of DV.
Doesn't happen often, but even the large horizontal view is too big for my monitor (only 23") and so I have to scroll. I think when one has to scroll, it influences, at least for me, a tendency to suggest a crop. And in this case, since the foreground is more important than the sky, I might crop a bit from the sky, say that upper band? But that may or may not suit you.
I also agree with Preston, that the shadows/darks are a little heavy, especially in the foreground brush. I'm not looking for shadow detail and perhaps it's just the time of day, but it just appears heavy in contrast - like you squeeze the upper and lower limits of a curves or levels layer.
A grand view to be sure.
Lon