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Fern & Leaf

by Albert Darmo

Gallery: LandscapePosted November 29, 20153,265 views9 comments
In  a small puddle  of  water  in the maplebush   ,  i saw these subjects floating,  i  hope  this  makes an interesting composition.. comments appreciated

D600  .. 150  macro..    f/16.     1.4. sec..    iso. 200  ....,tripod.-  cable release...

Comments

9 comments
Comment posted by Alberto Patiño on November 29, 2015 at 6:12 PM
Love the composition, Albert, and the color palette!
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Comment posted by David Schoen on November 29, 2015 at 7:19 PM
Good juxtaposition between wet and drier plants.
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Comment posted by Eva McDermott on November 30, 2015 at 2:50 AM
I like the abstract qualities here Albert.
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Comment posted by Harley Goldman on November 30, 2015 at 9:49 AM
Nice little miniscape, Albert. It works nicely.
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Comment posted by Jim Jirka on November 30, 2015 at 11:37 AM
I like the subtle color palette and the intimates scene you captured. A nice slice of reality at your feet.
Jim
Registered on November 1, 2003, 254 Posts, 1620 Comments
Comment posted by Dietrich Gloger on November 30, 2015 at 2:00 PM
Very nicely done Albert. I like how the dead leaves in the center are framed by the reflection and the leaves beneath. The highlight on the leaf on the right side is a bit of eye-magnet, you might consider doing some burning there or even crop a bit from the right.
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Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on November 30, 2015 at 6:29 PM
This is nice intimate little scene. I might be tempted to clone out the bit of leaf on the left edge, near the bottom, as well as that bit of stalk on the right edge near the bottom. I like the color and the detail.

--P
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Comment posted by Lon Overacker on November 30, 2015 at 7:52 PM
Albert,

Very well seen.  What I find the most interesting is all the understory - or all the submerged leaves, as well as the reflected patters on the water's surface.  The cluster of ferns and the lone leaf in the middle to act as a nice anchor.

I would agree with others about the small, scattered leaves on the bottom and left.  They're midly distracting for me and to take away a little bit from the impact this image could have, and what you saw.  I suppose selectively burning down those brighter areas around the edges could help a little.

I really like what you saw, just a few too many small distractions going on.

 
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Comment posted by scott lanz on November 30, 2015 at 11:20 PM
Understated but nice little waterscape captured here, Albert. 
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