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Swamphen 2
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Swamphen 2

by Balan Vinod

Gallery: AvianPosted March 29, 2015116 views3 comments
Folks,

Here is the next comp of the same swamphen which was breaking into the reflections on the water.

7D, 70 200

Many Thanks NPN for your support

Balan Vinod

Comments

3 comments
Comment posted by Dennis Plank on March 29, 2015 at 6:13 PM
Beautiful reflections, Balan, and the swamphen is a beautiful bird, but to my eye, it's a bit of a discordant element in this composition.

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Registered on January 28, 2008, 1767 Posts, 23192 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on March 30, 2015 at 4:56 PM
This is quite dramatic, Balan, with the strong colors of the swamphen contrasting with the muted colors of the reflections. I like all the reflections but there would be a lot of fairly blank space without the reflections from the swamphen's wake. I do wonder about a tighter crop that would include just the two brown reflections and put the bird near the lower left 1/3rd crossing point. For me, that would let the bird be the main subject but in a really interesting setting. In this view, I think there's some competition as to the main subject with neither the bird or the reflections dominating.
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by Wayne Jones on March 30, 2015 at 8:44 PM
The striking bird stands out well in this "less abstract" composition, so I don't see the need for that much background. In particular, I don't think the lighter reflections in the upper left add anything to the composition.
Registered on April 18, 2007, 953 Posts, 6435 Comments