Gallery: AvianPosted March 4, 201561 views6 comments
This is photograph was captured in the Wakodahatchee Wetlands in Delray Beach, FL. Nikon D800, Nikkor 80-400 VRII Nano @ 400 mm., ISO 720, f/8 @ 1/400 sec, -2/3 EV, handheld.
Comments
6 comments
Comment posted by Richard Ditch on March 4, 2015 at 2:47 PM
The technicals look good in this: exposure, sharpness, colors, etc. But I find there composition a bit unbalanced, with my eye and interest drawn to the face of the ibis up in the top right corner.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1031 Posts, 12705 Comments
Comment posted by John Neukirch on March 4, 2015 at 2:55 PM
A beautiful bird, I like the white against the green and the reflection. I tend to agree with Richard though. The ibis seems a little to centered, perhaps a crop where there's less canvas on the left side.
Registered on July 9, 2012, 207 Posts, 1476 Comments
Comment posted by Wayne Jones on March 4, 2015 at 3:43 PM
Very enjoyable action shot, and good technically, too. Compositionally, I agree with the others, because the bird seems to just about to step out of view, leaving us to see what's behind and below it. As much as I like the reflection, it would be better to have more space above and especially in front of the bird, and a bit less of the OOF greenery in the FG.
Registered on April 18, 2007, 953 Posts, 6435 Comments
Comment posted by Steve Thompson on March 4, 2015 at 6:42 PM
I have to echo the others comments Ray. Great colors.
Registered on August 7, 2014, 125 Posts, 2319 Comments
Comment posted by Ray Laurence on March 4, 2015 at 7:32 PM
Thanks, everyone for your feedback.
Registered on September 1, 2008, 25 Posts, 10 Comments
Comment posted by Jim Hansen on March 4, 2015 at 11:53 PM
Count me as another in agreement with the prevailing comments. Great shot, just needs more room on the right and less room on the left.
Registered on May 5, 2011, 161 Posts, 908 Comments
Comments
6 comments