Bison in Storm II
by Ronald Davis
I took this photo on 30Jan2012 near the center of Yellowstone National Park, Wyoming, USA.
Canon EOS 5D Mark II
Canon EF70-200mm f/2.8L IS USM +1.4x at 215mm
1/1600 sec; f/6.3; ISO 800
Manual; Partial metering
I had posted a prior version of this photo on 26July, and got plenty of suggestions for improving it. This second (II) version adopts several of the suggestions. First I should say that the bluish-gray background is a very shallow water body with placid surface, and the black specks where the bottom pokes up through the surface. I have not removed these spots, as they're part of the scene, but can do so in a future version. I have restored more scene in front of the bison, and extended the water background at the top, but have cut off some of the bottom of the snowy foreground. Also, I have reduced the exposure of the foreground snow to show some detail. I have removed the red halo on the snow surface, and some of the light halo around the bison where I thought it was an artifact of processing, and left some "halo" were I thought it might be snow powder being raised from the surface by, or coming off the animal. ANY FURTHER COMMENTS? I plan to remove one of these two images from the wildlife gallery and my own gallery.
Comments
12 commentsI like this one better - for the most part. I'd personally take more foreground off, even if it meant losing that nice bit of vegetation in the lower right corner (some might suggest you could move that vegetation up as well, but that's not my style and guessing it's not yours either). Thanks also for explaining what the dark spots in the background are.
In terms of the light halo around the subject - without knowing anything about how you processed the shot it's hard to really say what caused it, but to me it really looks like masking artifacts - and for me they are really quite distracting (and based on their position almost completely around the bison it would be hard to convince me that they're natural). And sometimes the impression that something is a digital artifact (i.e., processing artifact) is as important as whether or not it actually is. The halo would be real easy to get rid of (in Photoshop). The attached sample with halo de-emphasized is a REAL quick and dirty (took under 60 seconds) and if I took 3 minutes there would be zero evidence of a halo or any digital editing...hope you don't mind I monkeyed with it.
Cheers...
Brad
I immediately noticed your improvements here, but also noticed the halo remained around the bison as Brad pointed out and mostly corrected in his quick edit, but I'm still a little baffled by the "drop shadow" effect above the snow. While I'm not doubting it COULD be there in your original capture file, it has a look of being introduced in post somehow. I have some theories as to various approaches that might have resulted in this, but it's probably not helpful to speculate. Frankly, the effect is kind of cool, it just doesn't seem quite natural.
In any event, you already know I love the image and only offer these comments as items to consider or look at with the goal of making a great shot exceptional.
Still jealous!
In answer to how I removed the halo:
1. In Photoshop CC 2014 - but this method would work with virtually any version of Photoshop
2. Duplicated background layer and worked on the duplicated layer (simply so I would have more options in blending the halo with background if needed, which it wasn't!). One keystroke combination.
3. Changed foreground colour in Photoshop to that of your image's background.
4. Selected paintbrush tool.
5. Changed blending mode of paintbrush to "Darken", and opacity to 20% (with hardness set to 20%)
6. Painted over brighter regions of halo - slightly darkening it in the exact colour of the background.
And...in my quick and dirty treatment - that was it. About my comment about "If I had taken 3 minutes..." - what I was referring to there is that the method I used would also darken the snow flakes overlapping the halo. I knew this would be pretty much invisible in such a small image (720 pixels), but on a larger image a discerning viewer would be able to tell. So the additional time would be taken to do a LITTLE selective cloning from surrounding area to bring back a few of the snowflakes - not too many would be needed to make the halo removal (and addition of the lighter snowflakes) virtually invisible.
While there are MANY advantages to using an limited image editor like Lightroom in a digital workflow (infinitely less to learn, simplified method of making selective edits, automation of many processes, offers full range of "services" needed in a digital workflow without needing additional tools, etc.), the power of a full-feature image editing tool (think Photoshop) gives a capable user so much more control over their images. The massive downside with Photoshop is linked to its power - there's just so darned much to learn and MOST of the resources available to learn it are just awful (and most are written or designed for graphic artists, not photographers). While you can find SOME half-way decent books that will help you learn specific Photoshop techniques, virtually none tell you WHY you should learn technique X, Y, and Z first (versus techniques A through W).
Cheers...
Brad