This was one of the first images I posted here when I joined NPN in 2012. There was a lot of feedback and suggestions on how to improve the image but given my abilities at the time, I wasn't able to make it much better. Since then though, I have acquired some new software and course more experience and managed to fix it somewhat so I thought I would repost it today, on the 2 year anniversary.
The original is in my gallery for comparison
http://www.naturephotographers.net/imagecritique/ic.cgi?a=vp&pr=190681&CGISESSID=5fdc2f8b9cab99472a9b6d56faf0824e&u=4212
Thanks for looking and please let me know if you think it is an improvement.
Comments
12 commentsI would love to see the original image to see what you started with.
As for the processing, overall, I think there is too much sharpening on the entire image, but especially on the bottom half. I like what you did on the top half of the new version. To me, it's almost perfect, maybe just the tiniest bit too sharp. For the bottom half, I like the tones, brightness, contrast better on the previous version. The bottom half of the new version is WAY too sharp for my taste. Uniformly too bright also.
If it was my shot, I would try to make the mountain and sky the main focus, so I'd try not to lighten the foreground too much. Also wouldn't sharpen the FG at all, I think.
Regardless, great shot. I would be extremely proud if this was in my portfolio.
Ed