Gallery: Man & NaturePosted March 4, 201482 views3 comments
NikonD3000,Santa Rosa,ca
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Comment posted by David Chauvin on March 5, 2014 at 6:23 AM
Again the color and pattern of the clouds are appealing. Was the blur of the trees intentional? Knowing the intent of the image goes a long way in helping to give a meaningful critique. If the title says it all then I think the blur and maybe even the trees themselves are not adding to the image. With the trees and blur it creates a slightly disturbing feel for me.
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Comment posted by Richard Teller on March 5, 2014 at 7:30 AM
I agree with Davids comment. The sky and clouds are interesting, but the trees do not add anything to the image. The blurry trees and the power line are very distracting. Also for my tastes there is to much foreground with no detail.
Registered on August 23, 2010, 1162 Posts, 6692 Comments
Comment posted by Doug Roane on March 5, 2014 at 5:27 PM
I agree with the above. The blurred trees are a problem - easily prevented by carefully selecting your focus point (in this case on the trees) and your aperture setting. Even without the blurred trees, the composition is problematic, with the cut off view of the trees and the distracting power lines, making this look more like a snapshot of a pretty sunset rather than an artistic image.
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