Future Uncertain
by Carey Closs
This was taken last year somewhere in Montana, on my way home from Oregon/California. Soon as I saw it I knew I had to stop as something in what I was seeing really resonated with me.
Some may find the tree a little tight on the bottom but there isn't any extra real estate to be had and I do feel the tightness adds some tension to the image. Still I'd like to hear your thoughts.
Thanks for looking, comments appreciated.
Nikon D7000
Nikkor 18-200mm
f/16
1/80sec
iso 100
50mm
Comments
13 commentsIMO the tree is too close to lower frame, tension or not. A bit too much noise in clouds also and some selective noise reduction can cure that too..
aF
The tension, imo, works and it doesn't bother me. I've gone back and forth about the grain in the clouds. Maybe slightly less would be better, but I'll leave it to you.
As mentioned before, there wasn't any extra real-estate to be had in this image, the reason being there was a fence running along the plain just outside the bottom of the frame. I would have had to have crossed four lanes of traffic to get a better perspective and didn't wanna risk some rubbernecker causing a pile up while I was trying to negotiate that.
That being said, aside from the point that Gary raised about matting I'm happy with the trees position as I feel it makes it seem small and lonely against the the vast darkness of the sky and empty plain, which was what drew me to the scene to begin with. My aim here wasn't so much to show an aesthetically pleasing landscape as to convey a strong sense of being alone in the universe by utilizing a lot of negative space combined with a minimalist foreground.
In regards to the noise, should be able to fix that without too much trouble.
Thanks again for taking the time to comment.
Tim!