Would really love to get some opinions on this. It's a re-process of a shot I took back in february. First time visiting mono lake(was actually on one of Marcs workshops). I've grown to really dislike my original processing of this shot, and wanted to back to it. I like this, but I'm a bit torn on it. Sometimes it feels like I went too far with it, sometimes I like the surreal quality of it. I'd love to get some overall impressions of the photo. Thanks!
I've also had a difficult time getting the web sharpening to look good on this file. I use TK's web sharpening, and it just feels kinda crunchy. But if I back off on the sharpening, then it just looks soft. Happy to hear any tips for sharpening an image like this if you have them.
And if you are curious... this is my original processing of it.
http://500px.com/photo/25983507
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22 commentsI have never been to Mono Lake, but does the galactic core really look that monochromatic down there? Seems like the natural colors have been super heavily processed away. Also, is there some sort of post production star effect applied to the sky? Seems a little more on the digital art side of things, if that is what you were going for, then cool.
Great image overall though, and thanks for posting!
The star effect were added with an action I have. Some respond positively some don't. I could live without it really so I might just ditch it.
The had to do some cloning of the sky around some of the tufas to correct for the focus stack... which is probably where the sense of a halo is coming from. I should work on that a bit more. I wasn't seeing it anymore because I'm a bit desensitized.
Navin, I know what you mean about the right. I chose to crop it out because there was this bulge on the tufa that was pretty distracting I thought... you can see the very left edge of it here. I guess I could try dodging it back into shadow to get a bit more room to the right. I think I'll try that and see if it helps.
Thanks for your thoughts guys!
That aside, I recall this photo from your earlier processing and from what I could tell the other had a stronger color gradient in the stacks but I'm indifferent between the two. The stars are a little over-the-top for me but what the heck, there's a guy out there in the Eastern Sierra who's been making a killing doing star-filtered star shots on postcards for decades now, and 'twinkle' isn't a bad thing. Not bad overall but not one of your stronger images either, IMO. You live close by, so you've got lots more to experiment with at all times of the year. Should be tons of new opportunities this year.
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Aaron, what is MA?
This is 5 shots total. 4 for the focus stack, and 1 for the sky. Sky was shot at iso 5000, f2.8, 20 seconds on a d600.
Ed
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI