White River Tributary
by Bruce King
This feeder stream is just west of Greenwater WA off Hwy 410. At first I thought the moving branches at the ULC ruined the shot but reconsidering? Also burned down the bright water ULC quite a bit, might need more. Sort of a busy composition I guess but neat and tidy streams are hard to come by obviously. Thanks for looking and commenting.
13mm w/cp
4 sec
f20
ISO 100
Comments
5 commentsA beautifully composed image; the rock in the LL anchoring the scene and the water flowing beautifully and the upper forest make for an excellent comp.
Would agree with Mark about a little more brightness - especially in the upper middle. The shadow areas lack a little detail which normally wouldn't bother me, but when areas like this occupy an important area then I think the detail comes in to play. Hopefully there is some detail in the original file.
The blurred branches in the back don't bother me in the slightest. The only other small nit is that there appears to be a dust bunny in the cascade of the middle tier.
A few tweaks and this should make a fine image and print.
Lon
Lon I think that spot you're seeing is a rock it seems too dark to be a blob of dust but if it's suspicious it needs to be removed I guess.
Ed