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Cotton Candy Stone w/repost
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Cotton Candy Stone w/repost

by Peter Coskun

Gallery: LandscapePosted June 14, 2013509 views30 comments
Took a break from looking at my white pocket stuff for a few days, then went back and processed this one, but not quite sure how I feel overall about it. I pushed the colors here quite a bit for a more artistic interpretation, but hopefully they still feel a somewhat natural. Double processed the RAW file for better control, and did some painting by hand to bring out some of the more vibrant colors in the sky. Comments and critique are greatly appreciated.

Canon 7d
Canon 17-40mm @17mm
ISO 100
f14
1/5 sec
CPL
Tripod

Comments

30 comments
Comment posted by Youssef Ismail on June 14, 2013 at 7:43 PM
This is very easy on the eyes to view. Nice light and rich color. I think you did an overall great job
Registered on November 1, 2003, 474 Posts, 5555 Comments
Comment posted by Eva McDermott on June 14, 2013 at 7:54 PM
A beautiful, upbeat image Peter. I think the "glow" maybe a bit over the top but a beautiful image none the less.
Registered on January 4, 2009, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on June 14, 2013 at 7:59 PM
Thank you Youssef and Eva.

Eva, I surprisingly did not add much glow to this image except in the sky to bring out a bit more color and smoother textures, but noticed also that the landscape had a somewhat glowing appearance which I wasn't sure how to tone down.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Eva McDermott on June 14, 2013 at 8:06 PM
Thanks Peter for the explanation. I have only been to the southwest twice, so I don't know the light there very well (I am more used to the coastal blues and grays in the east). As I said in my previous post, I think this is a beautiful image.
Registered on January 4, 2009, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
Comment posted by scott lanz on June 14, 2013 at 8:18 PM
A very attractive image with beautiful and pretty natural looking colors, Peter. Nice, well balanced comp as well. Overall, I find the image bright (especially the center foreground rocks) for a sunset (sunrise?) image. Maybe this is what Eva meant by "glow."
Registered on November 14, 2003, 840 Posts, 12902 Comments
Comment posted by Jared Warren on June 14, 2013 at 8:22 PM
Peter- I really like this. I think the sky is perfect, and although you say you pushed the colors I think the sky looks believably natural. I do think the orange in the terrain is a little strong. This place is on my short list- hopefully someday soon!
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Comment posted by Peter Coskun on June 14, 2013 at 8:24 PM
Here is a repost with the bottom toned down.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Metternich on June 14, 2013 at 8:37 PM
Great light at the pocket!!! :toast:
Registered on June 19, 2009, 276 Posts, 6240 Comments
Comment posted by John Mumaw on June 14, 2013 at 8:41 PM
I think this is a fine and unique composition from here, Peter. But my first thought was 'Photoshopped' and that's not the first thought you want from a viewer. The bottom half of the repost actually looks a bit more 'pushed' than the original. The original post looked fine there.
That's not the area of concern, though. It's the top part of the landscape and the orange in the skies that need to be pulled back a bit to keep this more in the realm of believable. I do understand artistic interpretation, but there's a fine line between that and credibility. I hope you take this critique in the spirit for which it's intended. You've got a real fine image here!
Registered on September 9, 2005, 62 Posts, 2289 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on June 14, 2013 at 8:49 PM
Thanks Mark and John.

John, I know exactly what you mean. I was playing around with different variations of the image and seeing what could be done with it. I have a much more natural shot from this spot with no orange in the sky that I might like a bit more (I think I posted in on 500px a while ago).
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Shane McDermott on June 15, 2013 at 12:21 AM
Hi Peter

I mostly agree with John on this one. I like the comp and I think it has potential, but the overall orange color cast looks a tad artificial and creatively introduced. I would suggest you back off the orange in the sky a look to neutralize the color cast. Trust that the natural color, shape and texture of the formations will hold sufficient interest and intrigue.

Later, Shane
Registered on November 12, 2007, 49 Posts, 1074 Comments
Comment posted by Youssef Ismail on June 15, 2013 at 12:22 AM
This is very easy on the eyes to view. Nice light and rich color. I think you did an overall great job
Registered on November 1, 2003, 474 Posts, 5555 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on June 15, 2013 at 1:02 AM
Thanks Shane, looking back I feel I went a little too far with the processing. I have a similar composition with more subtle light on my website that I prefer, but wondering if I could tweak it any further without going overboard.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Colin H Sillerud on June 15, 2013 at 1:37 AM
I like this one a lot Peter. I don't think that the color is over done at all. Just a nice sunset glow. Well, the clouds might look just a tad painted, but the color matches the ground very well so it compensates.
Registered on May 26, 2011, 17 Posts, 58 Comments
Comment posted by Ted Gore on June 15, 2013 at 2:05 AM
This is really awesome Peter. I don't have a problem with the foreground. I'd say the sky is a bit overcooked. I think it would be ok if it weren't for the bright spots. Looks like a bit too much dodging in those areas? Calm those spots down, and for me, this is excellent.
Registered on April 25, 2013, 36 Posts, 149 Comments
Comment posted by Scott Smorra on June 15, 2013 at 11:40 AM
Outstanding image Peter. The repost looks perfect to me. I really like the colors and textures in the sky. That sky combined with the barren landscape makes for an amazing image. Well done.
Registered on November 2, 2009, 161 Posts, 2143 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on June 15, 2013 at 2:51 PM
Peter,

I think this is beautiful! I do prefer the repost, but the change is rather subtle. Not sure how you would process this differently without seeing the RAW or having been there. The sky/clouds especially have a dreamy look, but it sure seems to pair well with the fascinating rock formations. I really like what you have here.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Cristina Strudthof on June 15, 2013 at 4:46 PM
The repost image is excellent. There is a glow that seems off in the original like Eva commented on but the repost corrects it. I don't think it is a big deal but it was slightly noticeable.
Registered on January 14, 2011, 53 Posts, 363 Comments
Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on June 15, 2013 at 9:52 PM
Really like the style you've imparted here, Peter. Repost looks perfect!
Registered on November 1, 2003, 364 Posts, 22328 Comments
Comment posted by Michael Anderson on June 15, 2013 at 11:38 PM
Killer natural light that is very soothing and spectacular at the same time. Very nice processing. There are a few hot highlights but they are not a distraction to my eye.
Registered on January 31, 2006, 228 Posts, 3072 Comments
Comment posted by David Edwards on June 16, 2013 at 1:53 AM
Sure does look like food... perhaps some honeycomb! Really nice image Peter. The glowy sky and colors there are awesome. I like the original.
Registered on December 6, 2008, 142 Posts, 2623 Comments
Comment posted by Rick Lundh on June 16, 2013 at 2:49 AM
Love the tonalities here Peter! :toast:
Registered on April 28, 2004, 774 Posts, 4351 Comments
Comment posted by Youssef Ismail on June 16, 2013 at 3:32 AM
This is very easy on the eyes to view. Nice light and rich color. I think you did an overall great job
Registered on November 1, 2003, 474 Posts, 5555 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Coskun on June 16, 2013 at 3:47 AM
Interesting to hear the mixed thoughts on this. Overall, it seems like the majority enjoys this, but I still feel it is quite off. I'd like to find a way to maintain these colors for perhaps a more natural flow and something that isn't so vivid and bright. I've been tinkering with the file quite a bit lately and will hopefully at some point perfect it.
Registered on October 31, 2011, 170 Posts, 1240 Comments
Comment posted by Gary McGhee on June 16, 2013 at 3:52 PM
Love the alien look and feel to this Peter, it sure is a fascinating landscape.

Gary.
Registered on April 15, 2010, 142 Posts, 2416 Comments
Comment posted by Nathan Apodaca on June 16, 2013 at 5:03 PM
Very cool! I have never seen something so hard look so soft... :smile:

The highlights are a tad bright up top, but other than that, I can't spot anything else that may be off. IMO, this is a great use of artistic interpretation!
Registered on November 16, 2011, 67 Posts, 1127 Comments
Comment posted by Shane McDermott on June 16, 2013 at 8:27 PM
Hi Peter

I had a look at the other one on your site. I think it looks great, still looks beautifully dramatic to me! Considering this is your first time to this location I think you came away with some great images.

Later,
Shane
Registered on November 12, 2007, 49 Posts, 1074 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on June 17, 2013 at 10:43 AM
Glorious sky! Nice changes on the repost. You sure nailed White Pocket! Great series of images, including this one.
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Comment posted by Kah Kit Yoong on June 25, 2013 at 10:36 AM
Epic light!
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Comment posted by Abdulmajeed Aljuha on July 19, 2013 at 6:41 AM
The light here is amazing !
Registered on December 4, 2010, 77 Posts, 149 Comments