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Yosemite Moments #15+rp
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Yosemite Moments #15+rp

by Lon Overacker

Gallery: LandscapePosted December 14, 2012465 views32 comments
"Intimate Grandeur" I think is what I'll call this, although that could change.

So much I want to say about this image, but I'll try and keep it short. This may be my favorite image of the trip, at least in the top 3. The very first post #1 is in that top 3 also. This image for me captures just about everything I love above Yosemite Valley, and especially El Capitan meadow. The stately black oaks, grand, yet brittle. The grasses of the meadows colorful, graceful and delicate. The pines are like the guardians of the meadows and the granite walls are just simply humbling. Unseen and just beyond the oaks is the Merced river, the artery and lifeblood of Yosemite. As a photograph, a classic, unassuming composition that's not breaking any new ground, but it means everything to me.

I have to mention too, that I find this uncanny in light of Youssef's last wonderful image. This image is also a stitched 4x5 from two sheets of film (does this help Nathan? :wink: ) Just as interesting is that his image was captured from a vantage point where he stood directly under these oaks shooting across the river. Had this been the same day and time, he would have been in my frame. As I mentioned in his post, I'm continually amazed at how we all can be in the same place, witness the same elements, yet come away with so many different images. And that's a grand thing.

Ok, enough of that. Thank you so much for all your comments on these images and will be especially curious to hear your thoughts on this one.

Chamonix 4x5, Nikkor 210mm,2-image stitch, V100f, f/32@2s.
Lots of layers in this one! Working file about 974MB!
Large view saved at only quality 5, hope it looks ok.

Thanks!
Lon

Comments

32 comments
Comment posted by Aaron Feinberg on December 14, 2012 at 3:49 PM
Very cool scene. Love the color separation on the LF. And again w/ the stitching!! What is it with you people...not enough resolution already ;) Think you could pop the highlights a bit more, especially in the leaves as they look a bit middle gray, but love the way the dark trunks pop out. Nice work sir.

aF
Registered on October 26, 2009, 399 Posts, 2789 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on December 14, 2012 at 5:13 PM
I think what I like most, especially in the large version, is the subtle changes in color throughout the trees. All supported by the structure of the dark trunks. My preference would be to have a little more contrast, but I am open to a presentation resisting that urge and leaving the focus more on the nuances. Either way I understand why this is in your top 3 so far.
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on December 14, 2012 at 5:35 PM
This is absolutly beautiful! I just hope I can get here one of these days. Wonderful comp and the colors are awesome. I just love those oaks and the the grasses in the meadow are fantastic. I can see why you would love this Lon, I do too! This would have to make one awesome large print!! :toast:

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on December 14, 2012 at 5:46 PM
Thanks guys! Aaron and Morris, I kinda thought this looked a little flat, for lack of a better term, after posting. I'm always self-conscious about pushing the limits of saturation and often come up short. But I appreciate your point too Morris about "resisting the urge" to over do something. Here's version with a little more pop, I hope just subtle enough and not over done.

Nick, I do plan on printing this one. If anything just to include in my print portfolio book. Thanks!
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Chris Chamberlain on December 14, 2012 at 5:52 PM
Honestly, the thumbnail leaves a lot to be disered, and discovered. Even the small version seems a bit lifeless. This really starts to shine in the larger view.

The separation of colors and the nuances are impressive, and amazing! The foreground grass is awesome, and I wish I would have explored over in this area. Really nice contrast with the tree trunks and limbs that also have beautiful structure.

I do notice that the background granite is much warmer in tones here than some previous posts. I don't mean it's off, or wrong, just an observation.

This is sweet, and definately in the top 2-3 for me as well.

Chris
Registered on March 13, 2007, 500 Posts, 8365 Comments
Comment posted by Aaron Feinberg on December 14, 2012 at 6:37 PM
What's a 'print portfolio book'? ;) nice tweak.
Registered on October 26, 2009, 399 Posts, 2789 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on December 14, 2012 at 6:43 PM
Thanks Aaron.

"What's a 'print portfolio book'? you winked, so I'm not sure, but just in case. Try this one for example. Just a bound presentation case to show prints. I can only print 13x19 myself, so I use that.
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Scott Smorra on December 14, 2012 at 7:51 PM
Very nice image Lon. The details in the larger version are amazing. I prefer the more saturated version, but just by a hair. I'm sure this will make a great print.
Registered on November 2, 2009, 161 Posts, 2143 Comments
Comment posted by Chet Dowell on December 14, 2012 at 8:04 PM
Lon, This is my favorite of your yosemite trees that I have viewed. The elegant grandeur of the oaks and the rich variations of color in the image are wonderful. I also really love the beautiful grasses. It seems to me there might be another image with the grasses and tree trunks. I personally like soft and understated pallette that you use. Chet
Registered on December 3, 2012, 237 Posts, 1171 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Breitkreuz on December 14, 2012 at 8:25 PM
Wonderful site and a super capture too, Lon. The array of colors between the grasses, oaks, leaves, and even the granite wall makes for an excellent image. I like the look of the rear granite wall here with a warmer side over the normal blue or cyan that can creep into that area during capture, scanning and or processing. Looks very natural in this finished photo.
I might split the difference on the two for saturation, but, I'm usually off on that all the time with my own stuff so just my 1/2 cent input. :biggrin:
Registered on February 25, 2006, 525 Posts, 8448 Comments
Comment posted by Justin Richardson on December 14, 2012 at 9:30 PM
I have to get to Yosemite..Lon, i'm loving your views of this beautiful place! Amazing detail and color..the light you was able to capture here is subtle yet very effective. The composition is wonderful and very evoking. Very nice!! :toast:
Registered on November 18, 2012, 28 Posts, 134 Comments
Comment posted by Stan Rose on December 14, 2012 at 9:59 PM
Repost is perfect, Lon! Beautiful. :toast:
Registered on September 15, 2005, 836 Posts, 17099 Comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on December 14, 2012 at 11:19 PM
Lon,

I love the composition--of course I have my own love affair with these trees, but I like the way you've shown their glory.

Honestly, I think this image is too dark. I remember the light having a more luminous quality. Also, Middle Cathedral Rock looks too blue, for my taste--I remember it being warmer from the reflected light off of El Cap. The color of the leaves and the grass looks very good.

I think that with some tweaking, this will make a great print!

--P
Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
Comment posted by Eva McDermott on December 15, 2012 at 12:45 AM
The repost is especially gorgeous Lon. You have a real knack of capturing the elegance of these beautiful trees.
Registered on January 4, 2009, 1015 Posts, 13229 Comments
Comment posted by Brian Schrayer on December 15, 2012 at 12:54 AM
The large version of this image really captures the feel of this location. I like the color both in the foreground grasses and in the trees. The perspective from the longer focal length lens compresses and simplifies the scene quite nicely and gives me a sense of the scale of the granite wall in the background.
Registered on May 28, 2004, 114 Posts, 2890 Comments
Comment posted by Joseph Campisi on December 15, 2012 at 2:07 AM
As you said Lon, no new ground broken. But, so what? Beautiful array of elements here, all working together to make a wonderfully cohesive image. The repost adds just the right amount of pop to make this stand out even more. Beautifully seen and executed.
Registered on November 24, 2008, 304 Posts, 3211 Comments
Comment posted by Julian Barkway on December 15, 2012 at 8:04 AM
Hi Lon,

Stitched 4x5?? No Wonder the original file is nearly a gig in size! I have to say, I prefer the original to the second, more saturated, version but then I'm always one for a bit of subtlety… :wink:
Registered on January 18, 2007, 344 Posts, 1961 Comments
Comment posted by Dan Baumbach on December 15, 2012 at 8:19 AM
Even at quality 5, the large version is gorgeous. Yosemite Valley is a magic place. No matter how many time we walk through the same meadows, there are always new images to make.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 473 Posts, 7980 Comments
Comment posted by John&Patty Benway on December 15, 2012 at 8:54 AM
Lon, another beauty, I'm probably the only one, but I have to say that I like the original best, just for the more subtle colors, I guess I'm just a naturalist, anyway, love it. Beautifully seen and presented.
John
Registered on May 12, 2006, 626 Posts, 8700 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Richter on December 15, 2012 at 9:41 AM
Lon, it is amazing to me how the subtle lighting on the trees is counteracted by the foreboding dark shadow on the rockface in the background. This effect is still enhanced by the more decisive separation of colors in your second version. The foreground grasses add another interesting layer to me. A classical composition that works wonderfully to me.

Peter
Registered on November 10, 2010, 218 Posts, 2723 Comments
Comment posted by Nancy Lea Sandy on December 15, 2012 at 9:47 AM
The re-post is definitely more eye-catching but I rather like the original's more subdued processing. It seems to fit better with the shrine-like reverence you're portraying. Both are beautiful, of course and I can see why this is a favorite. Very nice
Registered on January 24, 2011, 576 Posts, 6942 Comments
Comment posted by Michael Cothran on December 15, 2012 at 10:50 AM
Yes, this one sings! The color palette is amazing and unique. Perfectly composed, and the square composition was made for this. Superb crafting. I do like the second version better with the highlights brightened a bit. I might even be tempted to pop a couple of select areas just a tad more.
I'm impressed with your 2-image stitching from film. I never had any luck aligning film images after the scan. But that's been a few generations ago of PS.
Registered on December 5, 2012, 31 Posts, 730 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on December 15, 2012 at 11:25 AM
Beautiful image. I was looking at the original, thinking it looked a little over saturated and warm, then got to the discussion and repost. Hmmm. I am still thinking the original could use a little dialing back. But I am once again standing in the corner by myself. Where I belong. :biggrin:
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Todd Liotine on December 15, 2012 at 1:37 PM
Lon, The repost nails it for me on my monitor.
Registered on July 1, 2008, 131 Posts, 671 Comments
Comment posted by INGOMA on December 15, 2012 at 2:28 PM
Wonderful image Lon and I love your description. Images like this make one pause and contemplate - a welcome respite from the rush of everyday life. Beautiful classical composition and I love the details.
Registered on July 2, 2004, 231 Posts, 3110 Comments
Comment posted by Daniel Rappaport on December 15, 2012 at 3:49 PM
The diagonals really give this energy. Nice balanced composition
Registered on September 9, 2009, 294 Posts, 2006 Comments
Comment posted by Youssef Ismail on December 15, 2012 at 4:04 PM
Lon,

I see this and it does two things to me. One it takes me right back there. I can fee the crisp air, smell the wet grass covered in the morning dew, feel at complete ease. Second it makes me want to go back right now. It looks exactly as how I recall it. It is all that the Valley has to offer. And not only that, but I remember stand right next to those trees making my panorama of the trees across the river. It is a sublime photo. If I were to change anything, I would brighten it just a bit. Kudos to you for this great photo.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 474 Posts, 5555 Comments
Comment posted by Joel DeYoung on December 15, 2012 at 4:06 PM
I can't stop looking at this image! Gorgeous in every way. :toast: :toast:
Registered on July 12, 2009, 92 Posts, 1074 Comments
Comment posted by Ed Lowe on December 15, 2012 at 4:07 PM
This is simply a superb image, Lon. I love the warm autumn palette here in both the trees and FG grasses. You have an affinity for capturing the more subtle, but no less outstanding images of Yosemite Valley. :toast:

Ed
Registered on February 7, 2004, 414 Posts, 7115 Comments
Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on December 15, 2012 at 8:28 PM
Lovely, lovely image. Even the grasses put on an excellent show this year. Not nits at all.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 364 Posts, 22328 Comments
Comment posted by Kah Kit Yoong on December 16, 2012 at 5:32 AM
The repost is truly stunning. One of your year's best I should think.
Registered on September 27, 2006, 636 Posts, 10682 Comments
Comment posted by Dietrich Gloger on December 18, 2012 at 1:34 AM
Lon, I do not know if you will still see this comment, but I wanted to let you know that I like this one.. :wink:
And I can see why this works so well for you. I think it combines the great elements of that park into a wonderful composition. You have done that type of image often - even the same tree(s) I think, but this is sure one of the best versions.
Great to see so many keepers!
Registered on January 26, 2007, 360 Posts, 9876 Comments