Behind The Trees
by Youssef Ismail
Thank you for the feedback on my last photo. I know it was not ground breaking stuff, but knowing that I made an impactful photo of something done commonly is nice to know.
Just after making that canopy photo I turned toward the sun and the silhouette of the trees with the glowing autumn color behind them and the sun poking through was visually exciting and challenging photographically. Not sure how this is going to be accepted as I am not entirely sold on my own attempt here but would like to know what others think.
4x5, Nikkor 75mm, f45, 1/4 sec, cropped. Usual development. The TK Triple Play actions really brought this one to life.
Comments
11 commentsPerhaps I'm jaded having photographed and wandered in this Cathedral grove of black oak so many times, but I have to go along with your gut feel on this one. Don't get me wrong, it's a vibrant and beautiful image, just not up there with any of my favorites of yours. What mostly is an issue for me is the blocked up trunks. Usually I don't care in these trees and I know there is near-black moss that grows on these guys, but it's more because they occupy so much real estate in the frame, and they'r all black, just reminds me of how poorly film handles these situations.
Come to think of it, if you cropped just inside both the large, forward oaks and just showed the light show that occupies that space between the two, including the nice light on the meadow floor, that might work better - at least for me. Just a thought.
Lon
That said, it is all about light and shadow, once again. And in this image we have the source of light, our sun, its effect from behind the foliage of the trees as it penetrates them and comes through to the camera, how it looks reflected from the grasses over on the right, and how that reflection contrasts with where it is in shadow due to the tree trunks. And then, again, the effects of no-light where the sun don't shine; i.e., in the silhouette portions of those tree trunks.
So, I'm just sayin', never having been there, not remembering any other posts by Youssef (no pun intended
One thing I would say is that your signature over on the left seems somewhat ostentatious to me. I understand the desire to protect IP, but there are degrees....