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Behind The Trees
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Behind The Trees

by Youssef Ismail

Gallery: LandscapePosted December 8, 2012634 views11 comments
Thank you for the feedback on my last photo. I know it was not ground breaking stuff, but knowing that I made an impactful photo of something done commonly is nice to know.

Just after making that canopy photo I turned toward the sun and the silhouette of the trees with the glowing autumn color behind them and the sun poking through was visually exciting and challenging photographically. Not sure how this is going to be accepted as I am not entirely sold on my own attempt here but would like to know what others think.

4x5, Nikkor 75mm, f45, 1/4 sec, cropped. Usual development. The TK Triple Play actions really brought this one to life.

Comments

11 comments
Comment posted by Justin Richardson on December 8, 2012 at 3:13 PM
Love the range of exposure here..nicely done!
Registered on November 18, 2012, 28 Posts, 134 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on December 8, 2012 at 3:22 PM
Beautiful, Youssef. I like this a lot. Processing looks real nice, too.
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on December 8, 2012 at 3:39 PM
Youssef,

Perhaps I'm jaded having photographed and wandered in this Cathedral grove of black oak so many times, but I have to go along with your gut feel on this one. Don't get me wrong, it's a vibrant and beautiful image, just not up there with any of my favorites of yours. What mostly is an issue for me is the blocked up trunks. Usually I don't care in these trees and I know there is near-black moss that grows on these guys, but it's more because they occupy so much real estate in the frame, and they'r all black, just reminds me of how poorly film handles these situations.

Come to think of it, if you cropped just inside both the large, forward oaks and just showed the light show that occupies that space between the two, including the nice light on the meadow floor, that might work better - at least for me. Just a thought.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Youssef Ismail on December 8, 2012 at 3:43 PM
Funny that you should make that crop suggestion Lon, because it was the light from the meadow in the exact area that you mention that caught my eye first. I used that area to meter off of as well to make sure I did not lose the tonality there. Let me consider that crop. Thanks.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 474 Posts, 5555 Comments
Comment posted by John Clulow on December 8, 2012 at 5:25 PM
I don't have the benefit or pleasure of connecting this image to any other or to any place I've never been.

That said, it is all about light and shadow, once again. And in this image we have the source of light, our sun, its effect from behind the foliage of the trees as it penetrates them and comes through to the camera, how it looks reflected from the grasses over on the right, and how that reflection contrasts with where it is in shadow due to the tree trunks. And then, again, the effects of no-light where the sun don't shine; i.e., in the silhouette portions of those tree trunks.

So, I'm just sayin', never having been there, not remembering any other posts by Youssef (no pun intended :smile: ), just this one standing on its own, I appreciate it for the aforementioned reasons.

One thing I would say is that your signature over on the left seems somewhat ostentatious to me. I understand the desire to protect IP, but there are degrees.... :wink:
Registered on November 1, 2012, 155 Posts, 1079 Comments
Comment posted by Robert Dayton on December 8, 2012 at 6:52 PM
A lovely fall scenic in Yosemite Valley. Wonderfully backlit.
Registered on November 11, 2008, 281 Posts, 3958 Comments
Comment posted by John Williams on December 8, 2012 at 7:02 PM
I'll bet it was challenging! It's not easy to shoot straight at the sun like this. I like the way it sets the color to glowing though.
Registered on September 6, 2007, 221 Posts, 5985 Comments
Comment posted by Philip Hodgkins on December 8, 2012 at 7:10 PM
I would echo Lon's thoughtful critique.
Registered on July 24, 2006, 2741 Posts, 12349 Comments
Comment posted by Stuart Williams on December 9, 2012 at 12:44 AM
again, lovely glow to this with the graphic forms of the trunks. well done.
Registered on December 7, 2007, 247 Posts, 4792 Comments
Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on December 9, 2012 at 8:47 AM
I like this combination of high contrast but also saturated color. That's not an easy combination to make work, and this does so very well, IMO. Also like how you made a horizontal pano out of vertical trunks. Creates some nice repetition.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 364 Posts, 22328 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on December 9, 2012 at 5:08 PM
A little too much contrast for my taste, but it's not unnatural looking at all. I think you did a very good job with the light in this. I like the pano a lot for the comp as well. Beautiful image.
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments