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Yosemite Moments#6+orig
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Yosemite Moments#6+orig

by Lon Overacker

Gallery: LandscapePosted November 25, 2012525 views30 comments
Tired of Yosemite yet? I hope not, cause I'll be posting through til around Christmas.

This was the first scene of the second day. As is often the case in the valley, the meadows often have a thin veil of fog that comes in and out until the sun reaches the meadow and it all evaporates. It's always fun and a challenge to try and capture this misty fog. Of course, a major pitfall with large format is that it's very difficult to photograph dynamic and quickly changing conditions, which can be frustrating at times, as was the case this morning. Because it was the first image, I needed time to unpack and set up the camera, frame, focus, check exposure, load the film holder, etc. etc..... well, I missed the frickin' fog! It had mostly dissipated by the time I was ready. Alas, I took the picture anyway.

So, if you missed the fog, how did you get this then? Well, in full disclosure, I added some fog back in a PS layer. I did capture a thin veil of fog, but the image captured on film was not the one I witnessed all during the time I was setting up. This is how I best remember the scene.

Very curious to hear how this works for everyone. I was actually very enamored with the grasses and just the overall textures and colors of the meadow and here, the oaks really just an accent, giving context to the meadow.

As always your thoughts and critiques welcome.

4x5, Nikkor 210mm, V50, f/32 @10s

Thanks!
Lon

Comments

30 comments
Comment posted by Preston Birdwell on November 25, 2012 at 1:56 PM
This works for me. The frost on the grasses and the fog give this a dreamy feeling. I like how the background trees sort of float in the fog. While I probably wouldn't add fog that wasn't already there, I think doing so was the right choice here. I recall that morning very well (cold feet and all) and your image is definitely the way the meadow appeared when we first arrived.

Nicely done, sir!

--P
Registered on November 1, 2003, 471 Posts, 5188 Comments
Comment posted by R.Bill Moser on November 25, 2012 at 2:06 PM
This is another great shot from you. This works well for me. The frost on the grasses combined with the fog gives it a cold feel and create a great mood......but soemhow it also makes it dreamy, as Preston mentioned. The processing looks spot on. Well done :toast:
Registered on January 29, 2010, 285 Posts, 4281 Comments
Comment posted by John&Patty Benway on November 25, 2012 at 2:59 PM
What really strikes me about this,is the natural look, if I was standing next to you, I'm sure this is exactly what I would be seeing, and I love that, this reminds me so much of the Pinebush, and I will think of this the next time I'm in there. Beautiful Lon, definitely love this one, hope you got more coming. oh by the way, you really made me laugh with the frickin fog thing. I've run to spots trying to catch the fog, and watched it disappear before I got my tripod open. :toast:
John
Registered on May 12, 2006, 626 Posts, 8700 Comments
Comment posted by Philip Hodgkins on November 25, 2012 at 3:05 PM
I think adding the fog was an interesting choice. It would, at least for me, have been nice to see just a bit more presence of the oaks.

I looked at the large image—should have first. The oaks are more distinct in the large image. This grows on me!
Registered on July 24, 2006, 2741 Posts, 12349 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Richter on November 25, 2012 at 3:08 PM
Lon, there are stunning details in the foreground grasses that keep my attention. While the tree stump anchores the image well, the misty background helps me to concentrate on the delightful details in the lower part.

Peter
Registered on November 10, 2010, 218 Posts, 2723 Comments
Comment posted by Nancy Lea Sandy on November 25, 2012 at 3:18 PM
Interesting. the image is wonderful and I like the mood you added with the fog. I"m not sure you needed it with the frosty looking grass heads and that wonderful old stump. You could eliminate the foggy trees and still have a stunning image. That said, this is very nice and a great capture of a memorable moment.
Registered on January 24, 2011, 576 Posts, 6942 Comments
Comment posted by Joseph Campisi on November 25, 2012 at 3:37 PM
The trees in the background that are almost lost in the fog really make this shot for me, and are a great visual contrast to the sharply defined frosted grasses in the foreground. Great mood and execution Lon! :toast:
Registered on November 24, 2008, 304 Posts, 3211 Comments
Comment posted by Justin Richardson on November 25, 2012 at 3:44 PM
This is amazing Lon..love the detail in the fg grasses. It definitely works for me!! Beautiful capture :toast:
Registered on November 18, 2012, 28 Posts, 134 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Gasior on November 25, 2012 at 3:47 PM
Very nice .Great mood and atmosphere :wavey:
Registered on March 7, 2010, 99 Posts, 502 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on November 25, 2012 at 4:33 PM
I like the fog added back in. Of course, I guess I would. :wink: Lovely light and texture from the grasses and plants. I'm back and forth on the stump. It's darkness does not seem to mesh with the mood, but it does act as a strong anchor. Nothing like a strong comment to help with an image, huh? :biggrin: Love the mood in this one.
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by John Clulow on November 25, 2012 at 5:12 PM
I love the subtle aspects of this; almost seems like it will be monochrome until the greens emerge. The frame really adds a lot to it, I think, by the way, and the larger version has a different feeling to me; I prefer the small version with the frame.

Definitely works, though, in either case. This would look great hanging on any wall!

Registered on November 1, 2012, 155 Posts, 1079 Comments
Comment posted by Daniel Rappaport on November 25, 2012 at 5:17 PM
However you accomplished this, it works - adds depth beautifully. Well composed.
Registered on September 9, 2009, 294 Posts, 2006 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on November 25, 2012 at 6:09 PM
What a wonderful mood. I love the frosted look of the grass and the wonderful detail. The fog and background trees add a lot to this image for me. This is really nice Lon! :toast:

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Nathan Apodaca on November 25, 2012 at 6:34 PM
Wow. Still some hints of green blades of grass under that thin coating of frost. That is one of my favorite scenes... Long grass and frost. In addition to both those wonderful subjects, you nicely anchor the scene with the stump, with the really tall reddish plants, and top all that off with the foggy bg. The processing is stunning, yet natural, and I'm excited knowing that more images of that incredible place are coming.

I think I've commented before, several times, that I love seeing the 'context' of an image. However (and I feel better saying this now that I notice Phil did), the top seems a tad bit blank and grey to me, almost as if there was too much negative space, to put it into 'photographers' terms. I'd almost suggest a crop, but I'd hate (and I mean, hate) to see the bg lost. I'd be interested to see the image with the oaks more visible. Anyways, just my thoughts... :smile: BTW, I should say that I am really, really enjoying this image in particular.
Registered on November 16, 2011, 67 Posts, 1127 Comments
Comment posted by John Mumaw on November 25, 2012 at 6:35 PM
This is magnificent! The detail in the grasses and the ever so slight reveal of the trees almost makes me shiver.
Heck, I even like the tree stump anchoring the image, and I'm not much of a stump kinda guy!
I didn't read 'til later that the fog was added, which indicates how good a job you did here.
As long as that's what was there just prior to the capture, I have no problem whatsoever with the addition.
Excellent work here, sir!
Registered on September 9, 2005, 62 Posts, 2289 Comments
Comment posted by Youssef Ismail on November 25, 2012 at 7:38 PM
Very nice Lon. The mystery imparted by this photo is great and is just how the meadows look early in the morning. I like that you actually developed the photo to what you remember rather than just what the camera captured. It looks real to me and well crafted.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 474 Posts, 5555 Comments
Comment posted by Chris Chamberlain on November 25, 2012 at 8:04 PM
This is photographic artistry, at it's best! Nuf said!!!!

Chris
Registered on March 13, 2007, 500 Posts, 8365 Comments
Comment posted by Andreas Resch on November 26, 2012 at 10:59 AM
Absolutely wonderful, Lon.
Registered on November 14, 2007, 322 Posts, 6101 Comments
Comment posted by Harley Goldman on November 26, 2012 at 1:03 PM
I love this!!! I find it interesting that it has gotten far less response than your other Yosemite posts, yet it is my favorite so far. I am not sure what that says about me........ :biggrin: Excellent, my friend!!!
Registered on November 19, 2003, 586 Posts, 11271 Comments
Comment posted by Natalie Mikaels on November 26, 2012 at 2:13 PM
I love the textures, I love the composition, and I love the mood of this image. This is one for the portfolio for sure. Nice capture.
Registered on November 3, 2011, 45 Posts, 181 Comments
Comment posted by Stan Rose on November 26, 2012 at 3:58 PM
The fg textures are awesome--in fact, i think i slightly prefer just the bottom 2/3 here; the top colors are a nice element, but they don't quite mesh with the fg subject here IMO. I couldn't add 'fog' back in, (couldn't we make the same argument as in: dang--i missed the sunrise, guess i'll create it in PS...) but i won't hate you for it :wink:
Registered on September 15, 2005, 836 Posts, 17099 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on November 26, 2012 at 3:59 PM
Thanks everyone for your thoughtful and insightful comments.

I had considered a crop, but let me just say my next image will address that... ;-) Actually I have a number of grass images coming up.

Thanks folks!

Lon

Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on November 26, 2012 at 4:06 PM
ok, ok, here the unadulterated raw scan, just resized. Aside from obvious color issues of the film, just for reference, there was fog present. Technically one can argue this was a composite, and that might be true. No less true than many other possible "composites," but I will say that fog was present so it's not liking changing out the sky or putting in a different sunset - but technically, well I guess I'm a bad boy. :redface:

Glad you don't hate me Stan! Whew! :jump:

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Joerg Bonner on November 26, 2012 at 7:00 PM
absolutely beautiful image, Lon! the grass, although frozen in motion, somehow reminds me of the sea. in fact, the whole image looks a bit like a seascape :) well, it's probably about time to go to bed now.. ;)
Registered on September 5, 2011, 44 Posts, 221 Comments
Comment posted by Stan Rose on November 26, 2012 at 7:06 PM
ok--interesting...thanks for posting! FWIW, i kind of like the blur tone to the mist in the original--might be worth trying to retain some of that in the processed version (which obviously is stronger overall)
Registered on September 15, 2005, 836 Posts, 17099 Comments
Comment posted by Dietrich Gloger on November 27, 2012 at 12:58 AM
I really want to comment on all your Yosemite images, but I can hardly keep up! I love grasses and I love foggy scene, so you bet I am liking this one a lot. I think your concept works out very well here. The oaks in the bg give that little bit of extra information needed to have a "scene" instead of an isolated intimate composition. The fog creates a beautiful atmosphere.
Thanks also again for showing the scanned image, just don't show this on your website... :biggrin:
Registered on January 26, 2007, 360 Posts, 9876 Comments
Comment posted by Vance Gese on November 27, 2012 at 2:13 AM
Man, Lon, every image you made on this trip is astounding, and this is no exception. The grasses with that touch of frost seem like a delicate dance of line and texture; that stump perfectly placed as a nice counterpoint in my opinion. The fog gives a wondrous and ethereal mood that complements the grasses so well. I have no problem with your redoing the fog; to me you simply enhanced an element of this image that was already there anyway, as clearly evidenced by your post of the scan. Lots of composites here on NPN of starry skies being combined with landscapes, each often separated by minutes to hours, many of which are brilliant images. Superb work as always.
Registered on November 13, 2008, 298 Posts, 6629 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Seaver on November 27, 2012 at 9:36 AM
Lon, this looks like what I would call a classic LF image...exquisite detail front to back. The grasses in the foreground offer so much interest when viewed large (and larger would be even better), then you've got the stump and the tall seed heads and finally the trees disappearing into to fog. You've captured the quiet mood of a foggy morning very well here.
Registered on January 23, 2011, 1103 Posts, 17270 Comments
Comment posted by Julian Barkway on November 27, 2012 at 11:50 AM
Lovely sense of stillness here, Lon. Love the merest hint of trees in the BG...
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Comment posted by Bill Chambers on November 28, 2012 at 12:12 PM
Beautiful Lon. I really like the FG and the faint appearance of the BG.
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments