White Orchids
by Miro Susta
White orchids from West Java Island. The photo is just 36 hours "hot". I captured these orchids during my very short (1 night) trip to Indonesia yesterday. Comment & suggestion and of course critique are most welcome.
Nikon D90
82mm
F/9
1/15sec
ISO 200
+0.3steps
Handheld
Comments
20 commentsMy two cents...
<> In the top background there is something that is white that is slightly distracting.
<> Would like to see the 3 green pods near the bottom right corner in focus.
<> Separation between the white bottom portion of the full orchids and the green pod would have been great.
<> For my personal style, I would have tried to eliminate the partially shown orchid that is at the top & behind the full orchid. Given the shooting situation, impossible to achive most likley.
<> Regarding the orchid on the far left. I would have tried, if possible, to show more or all of its colorful center.
Albert Darmo
Repost is an improvement but my monitor still shows a bit of the lighter stuff in background - but its not a deal breaker anymore.
Fabulous shot. Had seen many of these taken with white bg and the dark bg in this image is certainly a welcome change. Amazing DOF and sharpness with F9. The bg does not bother me but would have like to see the darker parts of the stem brightened up slightly so as not to appear disjointed.
The BG makes this beautiful flower grouping simply pop out of the frame.
Excellent image Miro
The various poses of the flowers let us see all the delicate structures from the different angles. Love that.
You 2nd rework is getting close to perfect. The stem on the right looks good but I prefer not to see the stem on the left side.