Maa Maa Come Baaack!
by Lucy VanSwearingen
These pretty, but messy, barn swallows took up residency under the eaves of my front porch. In fact, three broods were hatched in this nest this year. These two were frantic, that MaMa flew away (you can just see her shadow)...they were still hungry!
It's amazing how very bright nature has made their mouths... definitely attention getters.
I had a very hard time deciding how to crop these little guys Any way I cropped this, deciding which parts of the photo to use in following the "law of threes" was tough. Hope I made a good choice...
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4 commentsAs I said, I didn't know how to crop this. The crowding is a good point. I chose this crop, because adding just a little to the left side would have put the edge of one of the chicks in dead center. As you can see, it was hard to keep the focus on the chicks and Mom's tail, without cutting the photo into 2 halves. I chose to split the difference. The nest 's shadow is a wee bit right of center. And the chick is just left of the mid line....any suggestions? I have room on all sides....including the whole nest and a large portion of the mom's tail shadow. Yet, I can't seem to make it work.
You are so right. I do think the chicks need more "air" above them and to the left. How much more would you put to the left and to the top. Double the width that is there?