Gallery: Regional: UKNPPosted September 6, 2011105 views5 comments
1D MKIII, 500 f4 @ f5.6, 1/3200, iso400, -.33
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5 comments
Comment posted by David Sewell on September 6, 2011 at 4:40 AM
It is a nice capture of a fulmar, Graham, and I like it that you have got it against a terrestrial background rather than the sea. Where I think it could be improved is in positioning in the frame. As it is the bird is too low, resulting in a lot of wasted space at the top of the frame. If you have more canvas available you could try a different crop. If you do not, it should be reasonably easy to add additional canvas given the type of background you have.
David
Registered on September 10, 2008, 63 Posts, 801 Comments
Comment posted by David Taylor on September 6, 2011 at 9:20 AM
If the fulmar was ascending then the comp is fine, if descending, then I agree with David. As it is a still image, it is all academic, as we will never know, unless you tell us of course. Great BG as well.
Registered on April 24, 2006, 101 Posts, 837 Comments
Comment posted by Graham Goddard on September 6, 2011 at 12:41 PM
Thanks for the feedback guys....I should have explained
The Fulmars were ascending on the up-drafts, hanging for a moment or two, then allowing themselves to get blown over the top edge of the cliff before circling and swooping back for more hangliding.
Great to watch and even better to photograph in the light I had at the time....
Registered on November 21, 2008, 66 Posts, 253 Comments
Comment posted by Matt Cole on September 8, 2011 at 5:24 AM
without any feel for the direction of movement of the bird I think it does need to be positioned higher in the frame. Lovely light and background colours.
Matt
Registered on February 18, 2008, 17 Posts, 267 Comments
Comment posted by Oscar Dewhurst on September 17, 2011 at 5:02 PM
Lovely light, bg, and colours but I agree with David about the positioning as it is hard to tell whether the bird is moving upwards or downwards from the image
Oscar
Registered on August 6, 2009, 85 Posts, 502 Comments
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5 commentsDavid
The Fulmars were ascending on the up-drafts, hanging for a moment or two, then allowing themselves to get blown over the top edge of the cliff before circling and swooping back for more hangliding.
Great to watch and even better to photograph in the light I had at the time....
Matt
Oscar