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Dangerous Beauty and Re-post
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Dangerous Beauty and Re-post

by Sarah Clarehart

Gallery: FloraPosted July 15, 201166 views11 comments
Back to the cactus blooms..

So, I'm wondering if I need more separation here between the flower and the cactus? I'm not really sure about this one.. does it work?



Canon EOS 5D Mark II EF24-105mm f/4L IS USM
Manual f/6.3 1/80 sec ISO100 handheld

Comments

11 comments
Comment posted by Pat Sampson on July 15, 2011 at 8:28 AM
I like this as posted Sarah but I might also crop a little from both sides but mostly the viewer's right to put more emphasis on the flowers. I think I'd also try to emphasize the flowers a bit more with contrast/sharpness/saturation/warm color and maybe selective do the opposite to parts of the surrounding cactus.

Love the light and the mood. Don't break that. (smile)

pat
Registered on May 19, 2007, 953 Posts, 15989 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Teller on July 15, 2011 at 1:45 PM
I like the flowers and the color. I do think that the bright cactus takes the eye away from the main subject. cropping some from the right would make a stronger image. Maybe even a little off the top and bottom. This image is worth playing with.
Registered on August 23, 2010, 1162 Posts, 6692 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on July 15, 2011 at 8:30 PM
I get the point. :biggrin:
Very well seen and captured.
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by Bruce King on July 15, 2011 at 8:41 PM
I like this a lot. It's a nice break from the bloom fest. :wink:
I agree that a crop from the right might be a slight improvement and I might experiment with taking a little off the top and bottom to accentuate the flowers and details. But it's a strong image as is IMO. The light is a landscape shooter's dream. Nice.

BTW, great website. You're very versatile.
Registered on January 14, 2010, 276 Posts, 2212 Comments
Comment posted by scott lanz on July 15, 2011 at 9:49 PM
I like the comp and light. If I were to make a suggestion, it would be more DOF to give more emphasis to the sharp thorns.
Registered on November 14, 2003, 840 Posts, 12902 Comments
Comment posted by Sarah Clarehart on July 15, 2011 at 10:03 PM
Thanks for all the feedback. I made some adjustments per your suggestions.. the change is pretty dramatic, so let me know what you think. I definitely like the crop. I agree there wasn't enough of a spotlight on the subject.

Bruce, thanks for taking a look at my website. I'm still building it .. such an overwhelming task to sort through images.. sigh. I started out, a few years ago, working mostly landscape and travel. Big thanks to the folks over at TPN, who raised me up from a hatchling. I know a bunch of those folks are also on this site (great guys like Hank Pennington and Tom Guffrey) and I owe a lot to them. Just sayin. :smile:

:toast:
Registered on April 22, 2011, 5 Posts, 30 Comments
Comment posted by Bob&Charly Nelson on July 16, 2011 at 12:01 AM
Sarah, the re-post makes this an entirely different picture. You really nailed the suggestions. Superb.
Bob
Registered on October 27, 2005, 289 Posts, 4202 Comments
Comment posted by Carolyn Derstine on July 16, 2011 at 1:34 PM
The repost looks great, Sarah! You put the emphasis on the beautiful flowers, with the cactus plant playing a supporting role rather than the other way around which is the way it felt in the first post.
Registered on February 16, 2011, 610 Posts, 3684 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Fach on July 16, 2011 at 3:22 PM
Sarah: Hmm, my first impression was if I was to crop it would be from the left but after looking at the repost I think it is a real winner. Great use of great light. >=))>
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1805 Posts, 26981 Comments
Comment posted by Ramamohan Pai on July 16, 2011 at 9:49 PM
Clever handling of the light here, Sarah :cool: - I look at the lighted portion and then slowly down to the shadows to meet the blooms there. Cool work :cool:
Registered on November 1, 2003, 550 Posts, 9037 Comments
Comment posted by Krunal Janani on July 18, 2011 at 8:08 AM
The repost is fabulous Sarah :toast:
Registered on September 16, 2010, 60 Posts, 1370 Comments