Calla Lily (+repost)
by Derek Yow
These have always been a favorite of mine because of their elegance and endless variation.
I'm kind of on the fence about the black border. It didn't seem quite right without something, and I tried other colors to no avail. What do you guys think?
Pentax K-7; f/22 15.0 sec, ISO-200
Thanks for taking the time to look, C&C appreciated.
Comments
12 commentsIMO, the black border is too stark. I'd suggest maybe a thin black border, then a pink line, then another thin line..kind of like this:
http://www.naturephotographers.net/imagecritique/ic.cgi?a=vp&pr=173149&CGISESSID=f8a566218cf0fa9d9bddfaeabefb6808&u=10967
Sandy
To my eyes (not a critique by any means) removing generously from the top to stop at half of the top opening (to concentrate only on the flutes, curves etc) makes for a solid photo also.
My suggestion for the frame would be a 1 pixel black, followed by a pixel or two of white and then a border of 2-5 pixels of black again.
pat
I got your email on my poppy. I do like the lighter version as well :)
Thanks again!
This is a fabulous take on a Calla. The frame on the repost is more elegant. Well done.
PS: Calla is also one of Mapplethorpe's favorite flowers and his take of them are almost sensual! (described as foreskin and erect spadix by Patti Smith)
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI