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Calla Lily (+repost)
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Calla Lily (+repost)

by Derek Yow

Gallery: FloraPosted June 15, 201171 views12 comments
These have always been a favorite of mine because of their elegance and endless variation.

I'm kind of on the fence about the black border. It didn't seem quite right without something, and I tried other colors to no avail. What do you guys think?

Pentax K-7; f/22 15.0 sec, ISO-200

Thanks for taking the time to look, C&C appreciated.

Comments

12 comments
Comment posted by SandyRichardsBrown on June 15, 2011 at 10:59 PM
Very graceful and elegant! Lov e the subtle lines and softness.
IMO, the black border is too stark. I'd suggest maybe a thin black border, then a pink line, then another thin line..kind of like this:
http://www.naturephotographers.net/imagecritique/ic.cgi?a=vp&pr=173149&CGISESSID=f8a566218cf0fa9d9bddfaeabefb6808&u=10967

Sandy
Registered on November 24, 2003, 3937 Posts, 12909 Comments
Comment posted by Ramamohan Pai on June 16, 2011 at 12:04 AM
Derek, Our Calla bulbs are just about coming alive :cool: - not sure we'll have flowers, but I am eagerly waiting to shoot my first Calla. This is a nice portrait of the Calla - sharp enough and soft enough too.

To my eyes (not a critique by any means) removing generously from the top to stop at half of the top opening (to concentrate only on the flutes, curves etc) makes for a solid photo also.

My suggestion for the frame would be a 1 pixel black, followed by a pixel or two of white and then a border of 2-5 pixels of black again.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 550 Posts, 9037 Comments
Comment posted by Bob Duff on June 16, 2011 at 5:51 AM
A very nice calla indeed Derek. The BG works very well witht he bloom. Don't have any great suggestions for the frame other than to try what has been suggested or try a frame with a complimentary colour in it.
Registered on April 21, 2010, 160 Posts, 1675 Comments
Comment posted by Pat Sampson on June 16, 2011 at 8:19 AM
Just the right balance of softness and detail in the textures Derek. I also like the bg for it very much. I would try some of the other framing suggestions that have been made. It's a beautiful rendition of the flower.

pat
Registered on May 19, 2007, 953 Posts, 15989 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Fach on June 16, 2011 at 1:48 PM
Derek: The image is terrific so I'm not concerned much with the frame. Perhaps it is a little heavy but so it goes. I do like the other suggestions. I especially like the color palette and your BG. Very well done.>=))>
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1805 Posts, 26981 Comments
Comment posted by Cindy Garwood on June 16, 2011 at 2:41 PM
Beautiful! Great job!

I got your email on my poppy. I do like the lighter version as well :)
Registered on April 7, 2011, 46 Posts, 141 Comments
Comment posted by Larry Lynch on June 16, 2011 at 6:52 PM
Wonderful use of color. Love the bg and the capture. :toast:
Registered on September 16, 2006, 773 Posts, 9940 Comments
Comment posted by Derek Yow on June 16, 2011 at 7:23 PM
Thanks for all the feedback, it's much appreciated! I played around with a few different options for the frame, and here is the one I prefered from what I tried. Decided I liked a little less heavy-handed approach. This doesnt seem as difficult with a black BG, I guess I need to work with colored BGs more!

Thanks again!
Registered on May 18, 2010, 26 Posts, 655 Comments
Comment posted by Gary Yeoh on June 16, 2011 at 10:02 PM
Derek:
This is a fabulous take on a Calla. The frame on the repost is more elegant. Well done.

PS: Calla is also one of Mapplethorpe's favorite flowers and his take of them are almost sensual! (described as foreskin and erect spadix by Patti Smith)
Registered on September 1, 2009, 588 Posts, 8184 Comments
Comment posted by Anne K. Rusk on June 16, 2011 at 10:35 PM
I like the reposted framing more than the black bg. I'm a big fan of drop shadows for web presentation to set it off from the screen. Excellent bg to tie this together. Wonderfully done!
Registered on October 10, 2010, 65 Posts, 904 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on June 17, 2011 at 9:55 AM
Beautiful! and so elegant. I enjoy how the border in the 2nd picture works with this. Really nice!

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Ian Wolfenden on June 18, 2011 at 4:35 PM
A wonderfully textured image, Derek, with nice variations in sharp and soft and superb colouring. The composition is simple - and that, I think, is just right for this flower. Definitely prefer the frame in the repost.
Registered on May 18, 2007, 1108 Posts, 7647 Comments