Rufus Hummingbird
by Charlie Baugh
Rufus Hummingbird, male.
Shot 3 years ago 4/24/2008
Olympus E-520
50-200mm F2.8-3.5 + EC14
Aperture priority
FL 283mm
1/640 sec @ f4.9
ISO100
monopod
manual focus
2 frame sequential
Large version for detail
Genuinely appreciate all comments and critiques.
Comments
9 commentsHarry
A few things I would like to mention though:
Certain areas of the perch appear very "hot" in contrast with other parts that seem well exposed.
For me, the subject is a little "tight" in the frame and, working with the assumption that you cropped this image, I think perhaps more space around it would work a lot better, especially in a landscape/horizontal format with more space on the left for the subject to look into.
Although it's not as noticeable in the smaller version, soon as the larger version came up my eyes locked onto all those areas that show rough artifacts (not sure if this is the correct term) around practically everything that outlines the bird and the perch. My guess is this has something to do with work you may have done on this image in PP, but it may also have something to do with the file compression, something other members have been endeavouring to teach me about recently ;^)
Hopefully others will be able to explain this better to you than I can.
As I've learned with my own PP work, one of the main keys to successful smoothing out of grain in the background is to greatly increase the size of the image in PS and use a relatively small brush size with the selection tool, so that my selection comes a lot closer to the edges. Doing this will go a long way toward avoiding those troubling areas you have in this image. Of course this calls for a greater investment of time, however, I'll only do this with images I really feel will be worth showing to anyone once the work is done.
By the sounds of it though, these are all things you're already well in the process of leaning for yourself :^)
Cheers, Luca
beautiful bird, great pose and colors.
NPN has brought me a long way and has shown me that I have a lot of enjoyment coming further along.