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juvenile black crowned n

by Sue Eberhart

Gallery: AvianPosted April 15, 201178 views9 comments
Taken in Ding Darling, last week of March at 9am. I was able to creep down with my tripod and Nikon d300s and spend 30 minutes or so watching the bird feed along the creek.
ISO 400
400mm focal length
1/125, f/8.0
I am anxious for feedback on this image.Scroll down for repost, please.

Comments

9 comments
Comment posted by Harry Harris on April 15, 2011 at 8:10 PM
Sue, While I would like to have seen the whole Heron, I like this image. The subtle ripples from the toes, the intense look on the Heron and the pose. This would be a keeper for my files. Is this cropped? If so and you could add a bit of room on the right, it would give the Heron more room to look into.

Harry
Registered on August 2, 2010, 169 Posts, 741 Comments
Comment posted by Brian Gatlin on April 15, 2011 at 9:06 PM
the water here is superb, Sue, and I like the intent pose of the heron. for me, the comp just doesn't work with just a small part of the bird cut off. I'd prefer this looser all the way around.
Registered on March 21, 2009, 202 Posts, 4187 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Ditch on April 15, 2011 at 9:22 PM
Nice color and good detail, but the composition is too tight for me, especially with the missing back of the heron. The proportinos of the image show it has been cropped at least from one end so perhaps you have the rest of the heron in the original frame. If not I wonder why you didn't go with a little less focal length on your 150-500 lens.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1031 Posts, 12705 Comments
Comment posted by Sue Eberhart on April 15, 2011 at 9:52 PM
I liked the eye and the feet and to me, these were the two most important parts I wanted to capture. That being said, I understand what is being said in the posts. So, I looked at my images again, and found this one. What do you think?
Registered on June 9, 2009, 44 Posts, 208 Comments
Comment posted by Jeffry Oonk on April 16, 2011 at 6:23 AM
The focusing of the bird's eyes and beak on the water, and how its feet gripe on the rocks is great.
As is the fresh green reflection in the water.
In this image I would have preferred more space on the right and and would have loved to see the whole bird.
Registered on February 5, 2011, 21 Posts, 122 Comments
Comment posted by keith mitchell on April 16, 2011 at 7:40 AM
Hello Sue.
I like the first one with the intence stare a true Heron pose ,really sharp great image.

Keith.
Registered on July 12, 2008, 127 Posts, 1735 Comments
Comment posted by Mia McPherson on April 16, 2011 at 7:44 AM
The pose of the heron is great, I like how the bird is focsed on it hunting and not on you. The water color and texture is beautiful. Having said that though I'd prefer to see the whole bird in this case and more room on the right.
Registered on June 25, 2007, 491 Posts, 12566 Comments
Comment posted by Ron Bielefeld on April 16, 2011 at 9:08 AM
Sue, I agree with the others that seeing the whole bird in an image is best in a lot of cases. This is one of those cases for me. Also a bit more room on the right. I like the second image you posted. My only change would be a bit more room on the right, the direction the bird is looking.
Registered on December 6, 2008, 360 Posts, 7132 Comments
Comment posted by Kenneth Arni on April 17, 2011 at 2:26 AM
Hi Sue, reguarding the first image, I really think this is outstanding. I love the pose with all the concentration of feeding. The colors of the bird and the background water is great to me. I can even feel the concentration in the feet. I think you did a great job setting up and using tripod, as the effort really paid off in the sharpness of the image. I think that the close crop may be what helps me focus on this tense moment of the feeding bird.
:toast: :toast:
Registered on December 24, 2008, 112 Posts, 629 Comments