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Beauty and The Beast R/W
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Beauty and The Beast R/W

by Ashley Vincent

Gallery: WildlifePosted April 13, 2011141 views21 comments
Canon EOS 7D, EF 70-200mm f/2.8L IS II USM + 2x Extender II, Subject Distance: 11.9m, AV Priority @ f/5.6 (1/640 sec), ISO 250, Handheld, JPEG from RAW, Cropped about 25% from Full Frame

Thought I'd give you a bit of a break from me primates for a little while ;^)

Bangkok is a fascinating place for any number of different reasons, and one I'm sure not many that visit the City of Angels are even aware of has to be the enormous Water Monitors that can be found roaming freely across paths, grassy areas but mostly close to or in the waterways of Lumpini Park, the largest park of the capital.

The waterways of the park don't appear to be connected to any of the klongs (canals) that snake through parts of Central Bangkok, so I guess they're manmade, and I also assume that at some point years ago the Water Monitors were introduced by people bringing them in. Whatever the case, in no way would I consider them captive animals in light of their unimpeded free-ranging behaviour within this park and, in fact, I've heard stories that on occasion one or two of the more adventurous have actually sauntered through the gates and found their way onto the main road, though usually returning of their own free will quickly enough back to their comfort zone within the boundaries of Lumpini Park.

Having discovered them by chance myself one time while I was up there looking for interesting birds to photograph, I've returned at least five or six time spending upward of four hours a day trying to capture the most compelling images of these magnificent creatures. As you might imagine, I have something of a collection by now, and I'd like to share with you some of my favourites.

This first one I came across just outside the entrance of the park itself (part of the waterway skirts the outer perimeter of the park) before heading in. Back then, before I had laser surgery on my eyes, shooting as I used to without glasses, I could only make out movement and fairly large outlines of potential subjects, so all I really recognised was another opportunity with my beloved Water Monitors.

Looking through my viewfinder I could see something that appeared to be a leaf attached to this one's head, and my first thought was, “Well, if it doesn't look great on my monitor perhaps I can remove it in post-processing.” Needless to say, I was over the moon when I got back home, saw the image on the big screen, and realised that “leaf” had magically transformed itself into a beautiful butterfly – LOL :^p

Happy as I am with this, I'll be just as happy to receive your critique and possible suggestions, and of course any sort of comment is always appreciated, thanks in advance :^)

Comments

21 comments
Comment posted by Ken Canning on April 13, 2011 at 10:21 PM
Great detail and vivid color, and a bit whimsical too, very nice. The comp could use a little less room in front and top.
Registered on February 10, 2004, 88 Posts, 549 Comments
Comment posted by Ken Archer on April 14, 2011 at 4:13 AM
Great Pose and detail, I like the diagonal background line that coinsides with moniters body angle. I think a tighter crop could give it a stronger impact. Sweet photo as is though. :cool:

Ken Archer
Registered on October 28, 2004, 222 Posts, 6683 Comments
Comment posted by Ashley Vincent on April 14, 2011 at 7:23 AM
Thanks for your feedback Ken and Ken :^)

I appreciate your opinion in reference to the crop, and the reason why I chose to leave as much space as I did was because I wanted to leave plenty of area for the Monitor to look into ... as well as sufficient area for the Butterfly to fly off in if it so chose to do so ;^)

Seriously, I tried various crops but anything tighter than this seemed to be heading much too close to that box-style crop that, IMHO, works well about as often as ponytails worked worked out well for all the guys that tied one going back a decade or so ago - LOL ;^)

Always good to have alternative opinions though, so thanks again to you both :^)
Registered on March 1, 2011, 154 Posts, 2083 Comments
Comment posted by John Tobias on April 14, 2011 at 10:39 AM
IMHO this is a very neat image. I like the sharpness, detail and colors. The composition as you have it works well for me. I did wonder if the monitor would reach up and catch the butterfly? thanks for sharing.
Registered on September 12, 2009, 2120 Posts, 6455 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Teller on April 14, 2011 at 11:52 AM
The detail of the image is very good. The colors and background are nice also. I like the image very much, but I also agree that a tighter crop would make it even better.
Registered on August 23, 2010, 1162 Posts, 6692 Comments
Comment posted by SandyRichardsBrown on April 14, 2011 at 12:55 PM
Ashley, you're sure showing us some great critters from your part of the world!
Wonderful detail in the reptile skin here, and the butterfly addition is excellent - what luck!
I'd personally tine down the BG a bit.
Cheers!
Sandy
Registered on November 24, 2003, 3937 Posts, 12909 Comments
Comment posted by Darren Colello on April 14, 2011 at 1:09 PM
Wonderful detail and colours. Stellar work overall. :smile:
Registered on July 27, 2009, 175 Posts, 1100 Comments
Comment posted by Stephen Kaluski on April 14, 2011 at 2:57 PM
A very arresting image Ashley, as if the Monitor was deep in meditation, totally oblivious to the butterfly. The diagonal does give the image a strong character and there is good detail & clarity with the main subject. Personally I would like to see a little more room at the foot of the image and I also think a tighter crop would strengthen the image, however if you keep as presented I might clone out the small highlight in the top RH corner.

BTW ever thought of using an Angle finder to aid in the low POV?

TFS
Steve :toast:
Registered on March 25, 2007, 189 Posts, 1064 Comments
Comment posted by Rick Cloran on April 14, 2011 at 7:47 PM
Neat shot Ashley. Excellent detail and the butterfly adds that little extra that often moves an image out of the pure portrait level. I can see what the others are suggesting, but I don't think it needs to be radical. if you look at the top right corner you'll see the small light spot (trap) that tends to pull the eye a bit. My interpretation of their suggestions would be to see how a crop to the bottom of it (from the top) and left edge (from the right) would look. You wouldn't give up much real estate and I think eliminating it would give the extra pop the others refer to. A very nice bit of seeing. :toast:
Registered on April 6, 2004, 119 Posts, 1989 Comments
Comment posted by Ashley Vincent on April 14, 2011 at 8:10 PM
Many thanks for taking the time to view and share your thoughts John, Richard, Sandy, Darren, and Steve, much appreciated :^)

John: As Steve suggested, I reckon the Monitor and the Butterfly were totally oblivious of one another ;^) Bearing in mind I didn't realise that the Butterfly was actually there until I returned home and saw the shots in large, having already taken a fair few I backed off and went in search of more Monitors inside the park; from experience I know there's anywhere between 30-50 of them (perhaps even more!), so I thought I'd go see if I could catch any in more interesting poses or positions ... now that you mention it, I'm sorry I wasn't able to discern the Butterfly at the time, as I think I would have waited to see if it made good it's escape ;^)

Sandy: I agree the BG does appear a little bright, however, the colour of the grass as I recall was even brighter in the sun, and when I did try to tone it down it seemed to make the whole image look darker but not necessarily better, hence I left it like this.

Steve: Six months ago, when I fully committed myself to working toward realising my dream of becoming a professional wildlife photographer, I committed myself mentally and (though with a few reservations of my wonderful yet mildly concerned wife!) financially as well. I purchased a whole host of equipment I believed I would be able to make good use of, although six months later I must confess there are still a few of those pieces I've yet to even try out, and one of those is the Canon Angle Finder C ;^.

Thanks for reminding me, I think it's probably high time I at least gave it a whirl ;^)
Registered on March 1, 2011, 154 Posts, 2083 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Sharp on April 14, 2011 at 11:09 PM
The detail is great, but I have to agree with others that a closer crop would be an enhancement. I would be looking to come close to a corner to corner diagonal with the lines of the monitor and the line between short and long grasses.
Registered on December 9, 2007, 258 Posts, 9892 Comments
Comment posted by Ashley Vincent on April 15, 2011 at 8:07 AM
Thanks for viewing and offering comments and suggestion Rick and Lon :^)

Would have gotten to this earlier today, but I had another schedule to keep with Mother Nature; I believe She's promised me some near perfect BIF shots from time to time just as long as I get out there and practice as often as I can ;^p

OK, with so many of you suggesting the same thing, I'd be a fool not to give it a try ;^) Hopefully this crop is close to what you all seemed to think would work better ... actually, now that it's done and I'm looking at it I have to admit it looks better to me ;^)

Thank you all once again for your valued input :^)
Registered on March 1, 2011, 154 Posts, 2083 Comments
Comment posted by Stephen Kaluski on April 15, 2011 at 9:59 AM
Hi Ashley, the repost IMHO is much better and the image has a stronger composition to it. My only nit would be the slight highlight above the nose and to the right of the butterfly, just a highlight on some grass, otherwise spot on, well with the addition of a hint more below, LOL. :biggrin:

Pleased you did the repost. :toast:
Steve

cheers
Steve
Registered on March 25, 2007, 189 Posts, 1064 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Teller on April 15, 2011 at 10:09 AM
I really like the repost. The detail holds up really well, you can see the butterfly much better and the lizard and butterfly have really become the center of attention in the image. Very good.
Registered on August 23, 2010, 1162 Posts, 6692 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Sharp on April 15, 2011 at 11:32 AM
Like it... :toast:
Registered on December 9, 2007, 258 Posts, 9892 Comments
Comment posted by Rick Cloran on April 15, 2011 at 4:25 PM
Hi Ashley, Yes, that it just what I was thinking of. IMO it shows stronger.
Registered on April 6, 2004, 119 Posts, 1989 Comments
Comment posted by Ashley Vincent on April 15, 2011 at 10:03 PM
Thanks for revisiting and leaving comments Steve, Richard, Lon, and Rick, pleased the crop works better for you as well ;^)

Steve: Wish you would'a mentioned that highlight above the nose and to the right of the butterfly before ;^p I managed to work that out with the Patch Tool and then Surface Blurred the same area to smooth it out, but for some reason I can't seem to save the changes, perhaps because I made them on a Virtual Copy from Lightroom in PS, so I can't show you the final result, but thanks for pointing it out and rest assured that it does indeed make a difference, thanks buddy :^)
Registered on March 1, 2011, 154 Posts, 2083 Comments
Comment posted by Tina Schell on April 16, 2011 at 1:37 PM
I like the image just the way it is and wouldn't change the crop at all. Great get, whether you knew it at the time or not! BTW, we were in Thailand last year and I saw one of these in the water as we were boating in the canals. Had no idea what it was so thanks for clearing that up too!!
Registered on October 22, 2010, 26 Posts, 34 Comments
Comment posted by Ashley Vincent on April 16, 2011 at 11:03 PM
Thanks for you kind words Tina :^)

I would imagine there's hundreds of them inhabiting the canals within Bangkok, pleased you got to see one and that I could enlighten you as to what it was ;^)
Registered on March 1, 2011, 154 Posts, 2083 Comments
Comment posted by Wayne Willison on April 17, 2011 at 12:07 PM
Ashley, sounds like you were a tough sell on the crop, but it's a great improvement. Now the image has tons going for it in terms of comp, detail, and all the other techs. Nice work.
Registered on April 10, 2009, 292 Posts, 3967 Comments
Comment posted by Ashley Vincent on April 17, 2011 at 10:24 PM
Thanks for the confirmation and appreciation Wayne :^)
Registered on March 1, 2011, 154 Posts, 2083 Comments