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Holding the Gaze
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Holding the Gaze

by Joseph Balcken

Gallery: LandscapePosted February 6, 2011224 views16 comments
I passed over this one initially, but now that I have taken the time to process it, I think it's come out pretty good. I'd like to hear what others think about the processing. I blended three images for the dynamic range. I had another image of the sun lower in the sky with a nice sunstar, but in the end I preferred this version. Let me know if the sun works for you.

C&C are welcomed and put to use.

Canon 50D, 17-40L
f/9, ISO 100

Comments

16 comments
Comment posted by Marc Adamus on February 6, 2011 at 10:17 PM
This one probably shows off that powerful warm glow better than a tiny sun and over-balanced foreground exposure. The processing and layered composition work for me completely here.
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Comment posted by Angela Classen on February 6, 2011 at 10:28 PM
Glad you gave this one another look. I like all the different layers created by the receding peaks. The glowing orange foliage in the FG is great and balances out the sun. I would have to see the other version to compare, but this is very nice as posted.
Registered on June 13, 2007, 434 Posts, 2742 Comments
Comment posted by Chris Chamberlain on February 6, 2011 at 10:30 PM
This is excellent, and the processing looks very good. The larger version really shines!

Chris
Registered on March 13, 2007, 500 Posts, 8365 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on February 6, 2011 at 10:53 PM
Excellent processing - looks totally natural. The eye has so much to enjoy and explore here, from the brilliant FG, nicely layered midground, to the perfect sun. Well done Joseph!
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Floris van Breugel on February 7, 2011 at 12:15 AM
Fantastic! I love the warmth of the foliage, and the layers add some wonderful depth. The big bright sun is a little eye catching, so I can see why you passed it over at first. One idea would be to try to clone a little color back into the edges of the sun at low opacity to reduce its size and impact. In any case, some fantastic light and composition!
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Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on February 7, 2011 at 12:18 AM
Lovely. Impossible light, but you made it work here.
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Comment posted by Catherine Reilly on February 7, 2011 at 12:50 AM
I like it. But now you've got me curious about the other shots... That there's not a lot of sky works in favor, but I question whether that is a personal preference of mine or a helpful critique. Love the light skimming across the ridges and lighting up the fg. I think that's what prompts my wanting to see what this looks like with the sun a little lower. It's a bit bright. Still think it's a striking photo and would be happy to have it in my files.
Registered on August 16, 2006, 603 Posts, 9192 Comments
Comment posted by Catherine Reilly on February 7, 2011 at 12:50 AM
I like it. But now you've got me curious about the other shots... That there's not a lot of sky works in favor, but I question whether that is a personal preference of mine or a helpful critique. Love the light skimming across the ridges and lighting up the fg. I think that's what prompts my wanting to see what this looks like with the sun a little lower. It's a bit bright. Still think it's a striking photo and would be happy to have it in my files.
Registered on August 16, 2006, 603 Posts, 9192 Comments
Comment posted by Bruce Omori on February 7, 2011 at 6:56 AM
Lovely, Joseph! Wonderful fg and ridges leading to the sun. Wondering how that sunstar looks! :smile:
Registered on December 6, 2010, 6 Posts, 175 Comments
Comment posted by Gary Reed on February 7, 2011 at 9:50 AM
Works for me DR is fantastic as well as the deep colour glow. Sun works for me too. :wink:
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Comment posted by Joseph Balcken on February 7, 2011 at 10:26 AM
Thanks for the comments everyone. I'll see if I can post the version with the sunstar for comparison...just need to find some more time in front of my home computer :wink:
Registered on November 29, 2009, 48 Posts, 249 Comments
Comment posted by dean hebert on February 7, 2011 at 5:30 PM
I really like the "seeing forever" feeling to this. Processing looks fine to me. :toast:
Registered on August 4, 2010, 70 Posts, 1132 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on February 7, 2011 at 9:10 PM
Joseph,

This is wonderful; excellent in so many ways. Great capture of the setting sun without any flare - I'm wondering if you had to work on that as part of your processing? But no matter, because I think you did a fabulous job with this scene. The layering is excellent and the backlit colors at the bottom just add yet another element to this wonderful image. Congrats!

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Joseph Balcken on February 7, 2011 at 10:46 PM
Ok. I did a blended version with the sunstar and it doesn't even look good enough to post. Using the fg image with the backlit foliage makes it look unnatural and using a fg image with the sun lower in the sky just doesn't have the same impact. At least now I know I made the right decision :wink:

@ Lon. Thanks for the comments. To answer your question, yes, I covered the sun with my thumb for the fg and mg images.
Registered on November 29, 2009, 48 Posts, 249 Comments
Comment posted by Alex Mody on February 8, 2011 at 6:13 PM
Looks great to me!
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Comment posted by Ashley Vincent on October 9, 2011 at 2:45 AM
Not my current genre, but I love the warmth and depth of this picture Joseph, really beautiful!
Registered on March 1, 2011, 154 Posts, 2083 Comments