Happy loneliness
by Dorin Bofan
I'm going to take a chance here and post a tree shot right next to some stunning shots of the same kind. I knew this tree for quite some time, but on this occasion the snow on the ground reflected enough light to make it glow. It was also overcast, so the poorly lit trees and plants in the back created a suitable background. The hint of snow on the left might catch some attention, but I darkened it a bit. What you guys think?
450d, 70-200 at 154mm, f10, 1/8s, iso100
Comments
20 commentsThe background is a little distracting for me, since it's also made up of branches and shrubbery with earthy colors. I would be tempted do see if you could burn that down a little.
I'm not sure if its my monitor but the tree look slightly over-sharpened.
Thanks for sharing.
Great work, mate!
gio
Whats the chance? Now, if we got beer tickets instead of comments, i might understand...
Seriously, Ill get to the point--i like the idea but it falls short for me, too messy in the bg. I think a shallower DOF (blurred bg) might have pulled it off for me.
Hey, can't make any progress if you don't take a chance!
I really like the light or glow of this tree relative to the bg. The though the very bottom of the trunks seems brighter than the rest? Maybe because it's closer to the snow? But I would burn that down or crop some off the bottom. The bits of snow don't bother me here. The only suggestion I have would be to remove much of the magenta that I see in the background, but maybe it's just me.
Lon
Raymond, Jason, the trees were quite leaned and I accentuated this by positioning the camera so I would have a better angle for the main subject.
Lon, you are right about the bottom trunks.
The main reason I'm a bit upset on myself is that I simply didn't think of a shallower depth of field at the moment of capture, but darkening and removing a bit of color from the background might be a solution. It's so cool that I can get priceless suggestions here.
Nicely done