I met up with Floris out at this remote location in the Utah desert to photograph before meeting up with Guy Tal and Jay Goodrich later in the week. We had a campsite to ourselves and were greeted by a spectacular sunrise the following morning.
We had both been here before but only I had photographed it - in 2005, when I found that relying on six stops of grad filters stacked together in order to bring out some of the details in these fascinatingly lonely trees at sunrise didn't work so well. Five years later, I used two exposures blended selectively to make the image work and clearly both of us owe some artistic inspiration to Guy, who's image from near here is unforgettable.
Tech: Canon 5D Mark II, Nikon 14-24 with V3 adapter at 14mm. No enhancement of colors at all.
Additionally, I have been experimenting lately with some different types of interpretations, one of which I just posted in the
Photo Art gallery.
Marc
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Gary.
Also love its strong red color theme.
Can't wait to get my chance at this spot soon. I'm hoping for two double rainbows in the background!
Your motion blur looks great too - don't see them with lighting that nicely very much. Might be a cliche concept, but the lighting makes it stand out for me.
but elegant.
- Dan.
Question: why not just use the new Canon 14mm LII? I have been LOVING that lens BTW!
Lori
BTW, I'm hearing good things about a filter system for the 14-24 now.
I really like the balance stricken between the sky and lower section of the bowl; this allows the tree to remain a strong focal point - even despite the glory of the sky.
I prefer the second version, it seems closer to your typical processing and presentation. and the sliver of light on the horizon is to be expected, not a nit for me.
Pretty soon someone is going to have to rope this area off for protection.... the new Subway?
Lon
One thing though: where the hell was that kind of cloud action when we where there?
Kory, I forgot to order the clouds and they showed up late. Sorry.
Just beyond the tree the dark shadows are they clipped or extremely close? Also the bright sun area as well, clipped? I can see how everything else can fall into the DR though. I surprised you didn't opt for a sunstar but actually like this better as the main element here is the tree.
Nice work and amazing getting all that color out the sky. Makes me want to stick to intimates
I prefer the lighter version as the tree appears to be a bit more 'haunted'.
The bright spot on the horizon does catch my eye every time I view this one. I feel that a slight burning of that one spot would lessen a distraction while still adhering to your vision.
Hey, I'm getting a bit frustrated by the soft edges on my 16-35 (also shoot a 5D2). Is the Nikon 14-24 better, and are there any oddities using the adapter? I haven't researched it all yet, I'd just like better edges!
Paul, I made an evaluation of the 14-24 in the Photo Gear Reviews forum here. I think the 14-24 will solve your problems.
First, and this is very minor, I don't mind a bit of pure white around the sun as that looks quite natural, but I find the blown out area in this particular rendition a little too large, and thus slightly distracting. If you have the information, I'd love to see this with a little more color filling in around a much smaller "white" area.
Secondly - and this is more bothersome for me personally - the sandstone slopes right at the horizon, especially around the sun, look a bit brighter than they should. Considering the terrain is sloping away from the sun (although rather slightly), I would expect those areas to be a bit darker and also reflecting a little less red. IMO, a little burning of those areas would make this look more natural. In contrast, the immediate FG slope facing the sun looks perfect.
I should add that I can't see what's above you, so there may be additional light reflection going on that I can't deduce from the image.
I don't think I've ever critiqued an image of yours in my life, because I figure that everything you've done you have done for a reason, so it would all be personal preference anyway. I read below and saw a few people mention the bright section of the sunrise. I'd love to see this processed with that darkened down more in line with the rest of the horizon for comparison. I think it would allow more attention to fall to the fact that the clouds overhead mimic the sandstone hole.. which is just unbelievably cool. Those lines in the FG rock are EVERYTHING in my opinion. Perfectly placed.
Just saw that you can get the 14-24 for around $1400
Can you please point the way to your lens review? Thanks!
Chris