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Red Rock and Moon + B&W version
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Red Rock and Moon + B&W version

by Jay Martin

Gallery: LandscapePosted December 1, 201069 views7 comments
D300 70-200 @ 200mm
1/50sec f/18 iso200

Thanks for taking a look and all comments are appreciated.

Comments

7 comments
Comment posted by Floris van Breugel on December 1, 2010 at 9:29 PM
I like how you've combined the lunar (or martian I suppose) with the moon in simple but balanced composition. A black and white rendition might make the landscape/moon connection even stronger (and allow you to really bring out the sandstone textures).
Registered on December 19, 2008, 306 Posts, 4840 Comments
Comment posted by Ben Horne on December 1, 2010 at 10:47 PM
Although you have some complimentry colors here, I think Floris is on to something. When you do a B&W conversion, it is possible to pull out some amazing texture from sandstone. When presented in color, this photo is in the realm of reality. As a B&W, it can surpass that boundary.
Registered on August 27, 2009, 51 Posts, 959 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on December 2, 2010 at 1:20 AM
Jay,

I really like your composition here. This incorporates the "rule of thirds" pretty nicely and I think this results in a well balanced image.

B&W could be a good alternative, but I think this can be worked in color just as well. My suggestion would be to darken the sandstone with a Levels adjustment. Actually a perfect image to try out Tony Kuypers luminosity masks and painting techniques. The lower portion and really the whole image is a little bright for me. Pretty easy to take care of that.

The other suggestion I have, which is too late now... :-) would be to take two exposures, primarily for focus and depth of field. I'm wishing the moon was a little sharper and I think a focus blend is something to try down the road.

Thanks for posting.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Guy Tal on December 2, 2010 at 9:16 AM
Great composition! I love it as is but also think it will work well in B&W using a red filter.

Guy
Registered on November 1, 2003, 566 Posts, 15507 Comments
Comment posted by Jay Martin on December 2, 2010 at 11:19 PM
Thanks for the comments. Here's my attempt at B&W for this shot - does it work? I see what you guys mean about texture from a B&W conversion.
Registered on December 6, 2005, 200 Posts, 2209 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on December 2, 2010 at 11:40 PM
Jay,

Works very well for me. Even the moon seems sharper with more definition. I would still consider burning down the LL with this, even with the b&w. But this definitely has more of an impact and shows very well. Thanks for reposting.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by John Mumaw on December 3, 2010 at 6:54 AM
Excellent composition, and the b&w works well for this type of image.
I agree with Lon's advice re: burning down the bright band of stone in the lower left corner subtly.
Registered on September 9, 2005, 62 Posts, 2289 Comments