Gallery: AvianPosted November 12, 201037 views3 comments
The image was captured at the Ridgefield NWR. It was taken with a Nikon D700 at ISO 800, f/9 @ 1/100 of a second, 320mm.
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Comment posted by Mia McPherson on November 14, 2010 at 12:41 PM
Ray,
I like the natural setting and the two different poses the geese gave you. Compositionally I believe this might be stronger with a little more space above the heads of the geese if you have it and I might consider reducing the contrast and saturation slightly, the greens in particular do seem a bit on the oversaturated side and there is very little detail visible in the dark heads, necks and tails of the geese. This image is worth further effort
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Comment posted by Ray Laurence on November 14, 2010 at 8:58 PM
Thanks, Mia, for the thoughtful and helpful comment. I agree with your assessment and will work on this image further. Again, thanks for the great input. Ray
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Comment posted by Ray Laurence on November 14, 2010 at 9:38 PM
Here is my attempt to rework this photo. Your comments and suggestions are appreciated.
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3 commentsI like the natural setting and the two different poses the geese gave you. Compositionally I believe this might be stronger with a little more space above the heads of the geese if you have it and I might consider reducing the contrast and saturation slightly, the greens in particular do seem a bit on the oversaturated side and there is very little detail visible in the dark heads, necks and tails of the geese. This image is worth further effort