Gallery: LandscapePosted November 11, 201066 views7 comments
hi everyone
new abstract work ..i look forward to your valuable comments
Olympus E620
14-54mm II Zouiko
ISO 100
MANY THANKS
Comments
7 comments
Comment posted by Jim Greenwood on November 12, 2010 at 9:19 AM
I like narrow depth of field, the in-focus leaf between the out-of-focus foreground and background. To my eye, the large featurless dark region in the foreground overwhelms the overall balance just a little.
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Comment posted by Steve Sieren on November 12, 2010 at 1:48 PM
I like the 4 distinc layers!
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Comment posted by Jason Kim on November 12, 2010 at 4:46 PM
I think this is a good abstract, can definitely tell some thought went into this and it works.
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Comment posted by Morris McClung on November 12, 2010 at 5:23 PM
An excellent arrangement of lines, tones, light, shadow, and color. Your choice of dof works just as well, too. Well done.
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Comment posted by Julia Flanagan on November 12, 2010 at 6:20 PM
An interesting collection of lines, shapes and textures here Hamed. It kept me looking for some time just trying to figure out the relationship betwen the right hand leaf the the left bg leaf (or leaves). Still don't know how they are related. So I'm left with mystery - which makes me want to look some more.... Well done.
Julie
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Comment posted by David Edwards on November 12, 2010 at 9:58 PM
Fabulous texture detail Hamed. I like the way you've arranged the green elements, although I'm not sure about the large dark area in the bottom left. A very nice abstract all the same!
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Comment posted by Hamed Musharbak on November 13, 2010 at 10:00 AM
thanks to all of you
i really appreciate your valuable comments & your time as well
actually my idea was to keep the eye focusing on the first leaf on the right & the black area ( it's also leaf but was shaded ) i think it gave a good contrast here ...
thanks again
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7 commentsJulie
i really appreciate your valuable comments & your time as well
actually my idea was to keep the eye focusing on the first leaf on the right & the black area ( it's also leaf but was shaded ) i think it gave a good contrast here ...
thanks again