May You All Be Inscribed and Sealed (in the Book of Life) for a Good Year.
Back in early August, I acquired a bouquet of Stargazer Lilium and shot and shot and shot
This is the final image of the series. I came out one morning to discover the few remaining petals and pollen scattered on the floor. In the vase all that was left was the stem and a few leaves.
This was shot with a small Leica P&S--the Leica D-Lux4 @ f/2.8, ISO 80, .6 s, manual exposure, spot metering. I don't remember if I used a tripod or hand-held the camera. (Too bad that info isn't embedded in the EXIF data

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I removed one vertical leaf from the left and cropped the right portion of the image to remove the part of the shot that picked up some extraneous background debris.
As I worked on the image, I wanted to achieve a sense of hope for the future as portrayed by the upper back-lit leaf. I also felt that the large leaf symbolically showed the scars of life.
I deliberately left the small stem on the right side in the image as a third diagonal pointing the eye to the large leaf.
Now that's an element that I would like your opinion on. Sometimes I look at the image and say, Yay!, other times, I think the image would be better without that small stem.
Thank you for looking and leaving your comments and suggestions.
Best wishes to all for the New Year,
Carol
Comments
13 commentsI like it as it is, with the small stem on the right. IMO it is better balanced.
Mauro
On a more important note. All the very best to you for the New Year. Keep shooting and keep smiling.
Paul
Good experimentation, Carol.
I like this a lot and would put it on my wall in a second. Very strong comp and great light I think. I'd probably clone out the partial but I'm ok with it as is too. I certainly think the composition has a more balanced and classic feel to it with the partial stem gone but even so, this is one of my favorites.
Pat
Albert Darmo. Canada
Like Phil and Bob, I looked at the image before reading your commentary and thought that the small stem should not be there. The rest of the image is very powerful and poetic; I like you vision, creativity and execution.
The image is a story unto itself. Excellent work!
The ? of the small stem is a personal call, and in the final analysis a matter of taste or preference..
I'm leaning towards removal
Well done