Comfort
by John Fan
I decided to join the party. This is my first post to introduce myself. I am looking for critiques to improve my photography, so C&C are appreciated. Thanks in advance.
This is a picture of a frog laying on a lotus leaf, taken at a local park.
Camera: SONY A900
Lens: 70-400mm @ 400mm
Comments
12 commentsI like the composition, color and detail of this photo. I like the meniscus of water on the lily pad, giving a sense of the liquid environment. My only nit is the partial pad on the left. It is just unnecessary to the composition
Nice first post: good compo and colors. Yet I share Phil's remark.
In future remember to enclose a "larger version" for a better evaluation of the image and all the relevant technical info.
Mauro
I like the image as posted, but agree it would be a bit stronger graphically without the partial pad. The problem would then become the fading stem disappearing into the depths. I think I'd leave it as is.
Cool shot! I'll look forward to seeing more of your images.
Neil
Welcome to NPN. I look forward to your participation! Please take a few moments and share your reactions to some of the other postings!
Jagdeep Rajput
You came to the right place to learn about photography John and from experience I can say that one can learn as much, and probably even more, from critiquing other people's images, so don't hesitate to jump in and comment on other images.
Personally, I do not think the leaf on upper-left to be a distraction. In fact I feel that its presence adds a lot to this image.