This cascade is definitely smaller and even closer at home than the first one, 60 miles not 6000.
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Comment posted by Rob Graham on June 5, 2010 at 6:18 PM
Rugged scene, but well captured. I think a crop just below the sky would remove the distracting bright sky. I also wonder if a crop off the bottom to just above the stick might tighten up the whole image.
Registered on August 22, 2006, 842 Posts, 2824 Comments
Comment posted by Barry Vangrov on June 5, 2010 at 7:44 PM
Yea I agree with Rob that tightening up the comp top and bottom would make a stronger image. Seems a little "cluttered" with nowhere to draw your eye.
Registered on September 1, 2009, 148 Posts, 749 Comments
Comment posted by Howard Cheek on June 5, 2010 at 9:40 PM
You know, I've always wanted to get a shot like this using the long exposure..
Just one of those things on my to do list
I see the other valid suggestions, so enough said.
We're all learning here, no matter what level you're at.
Have a great weekend
Registered on July 24, 2008, 1201 Posts, 10758 Comments
Comment posted by Catherine Reilly on June 6, 2010 at 2:02 AM
Hi, Monica-
I sure wouldn't want to be the one trying to hike through this mess of boulders! I can feel my ankles straining as I look at this! So, in my view, the image has documentary appeal. But I think overall the little stream loses its place as attention-getter because of the wide angle view- all those huge boulders, the sky, no definite pattern to anything. Try simplifying the composition a bit more maybe.
Registered on August 16, 2006, 603 Posts, 9192 Comments
Comment posted by Stan Rose on June 6, 2010 at 3:12 AM
Hey, if you get one at 6 miles and one more at 600, you can have a real neat series
I really like this, it has a nice "earthy" feel to it, like something you are surprised to find on a walk in the woods.
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Comment posted by scott lanz on June 6, 2010 at 10:11 AM
Pretty scene.
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Comments
6 commentsJust one of those things on my to do list
I see the other valid suggestions, so enough said.
We're all learning here, no matter what level you're at.
Have a great weekend
I sure wouldn't want to be the one trying to hike through this mess of boulders! I can feel my ankles straining as I look at this! So, in my view, the image has documentary appeal. But I think overall the little stream loses its place as attention-getter because of the wide angle view- all those huge boulders, the sky, no definite pattern to anything. Try simplifying the composition a bit more maybe.
I really like this, it has a nice "earthy" feel to it, like something you are surprised to find on a walk in the woods.