Freedom (4 versions)
by Kah Kit Yoong
West Coast, New Zealand
2 versions of a sunset seascape. I prefer the composition and water motion in the first one but the light was better in the second. Overall, I'm leaning towards the first.
Canon 5DMkII, 16-35mm 2.8L, GND filter.
Comments
36 commentsthe water in the first picture is amazing
and the sky is wonderful in the second
I might go for the first one with brightening the front rock a little bit
Great work Kah :)
I prefer the motion in the water in the first one too. The left hand side looks a bit darker in the second one too and the bird is facing out of frame. I would definately go with the first one.
Ian
Gary.
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, Wi.
If I may nit, I would like the bird facing the setting sun.
Great shot!
Great light! beautifully captured. The first has a slight edge in term of composition I think.
A grand seascape to be sure - perhaps even encroaching upon epic? maybe? :-) Ya know, watching the iterations go by now, some times you just can't beat your first impression. I personally like the first version the best. As a couple have said, I like the wave action and motion in that one and while the sky is fantastic, it's not a competitor, if that makes sense.
Now if I had to pick another version it would be the second to last. The 4th version I think the color variation in the water from green to purple is stronger than any of the others. And in all the subsequest alternates, I think the blue in the sky is a bit on the electric side. Just an opinion of course, but I think the blue sky in the last two kind of detract a little from the rest of the scene.
Oh, and I like the seagull facing the sun too.
Lastly, I like the warmth in the original too. Fantastic seascape.
Lon
Absolutely Marc. I wouldn't have taken the shot without the bird. I'm fascinated by the responses about which way the bird faces. My initial thought was better looking into the frame, as if gazing towards the rock stacks but on further reflection, perhaps looking out towards the sunset may be better.
- Dan.
Wonderful shot.