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American Golden Plover
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American Golden Plover

by Jim DeWitt

Gallery: AvianPosted May 16, 2010110 views14 comments
Olympus E-3, 300mm x 2.0TC, laying on ground
f5.7,1/250, ISO200

This pretty lady was accommodating the Airport Float Ponds last night. And I think I found the problem with my sharpness: I reset the camera body (wiping out all my preferences) and cleaned the contacts on the camera's lens mount.

Seriously looking for feedback...

Comments

14 comments
Comment posted by Charlie VanTassel on May 16, 2010 at 1:12 AM
Hi Jim, Well, I don't think that you have any problem with sharpness if this is an example. It does seem though that the body of the bird is VERY sharp, while the head is a little less so. I've been forcing myself lately to always remember to focus on the birds eye, which I didn't always do in the past. But you knew that already. :wink: :toast:
Registered on October 18, 2006, 644 Posts, 4801 Comments
Comment posted by David Chauvin on May 16, 2010 at 5:58 AM
I really like the light, comp and over the shoulder look. :toast:
Registered on August 5, 2004, 1007 Posts, 5595 Comments
Comment posted by Gary Gulash on May 16, 2010 at 8:33 AM
I really like this photo Jim, one of your best to my eye. The grass color really works with the bird. Nice head turn. I agree with Charlie on the focus, just slightly sharper on the back. Lets hope that's where you focused and not a front focus issue as someone previously suggested in your last post.
Registered on January 28, 2005, 879 Posts, 12098 Comments
Comment posted by Brian Gatlin on May 16, 2010 at 8:50 AM
Jim, I think that the sharpness here looks good. The back may be a bit sharper than the head, but at 5.6, that is probably to be expected if the back was the focal point. I guess one other thing that would be helpful to know for comparison sake is just how much sharpening you applied to the final product. Also, I think that the head actually looks pretty good, and the main fault may not be lack of focus/DOF, but just the difficulty of getting detail in the whites on shorebirds' heads--using the highlight tool might help too.
Registered on March 21, 2009, 202 Posts, 4187 Comments
Comment posted by KC Choo on May 16, 2010 at 9:27 AM
Small nit has already been mentioned and suggestions given, all of which I agree with. Nevertheless, I find this image extremely nice with good light. I like it a lot as presented.
Registered on November 15, 2004, 519 Posts, 8278 Comments
Comment posted by denise ippolito on May 16, 2010 at 9:40 AM
Very nice HA for over the shoulder pose. The golden feathers are nice to see. I am not a fan of side lighting and think that the shadow on the right side of the bird is not ideal. I like the details and agree that the grass adds some nice interest. Another vote for some selective sharpening to the head.
Registered on December 17, 2009, 202 Posts, 1529 Comments
Comment posted by Terry Sohl on May 16, 2010 at 10:59 AM
Terrific! What a great setting here, and terrific pose. :toast:
Registered on November 1, 2003, 513 Posts, 6889 Comments
Comment posted by Dennis Plank on May 16, 2010 at 11:47 AM
This looks sharp to me, Jim. I like the over-the-shoulder look and the dof you chose. :toast:
Registered on January 28, 2008, 1767 Posts, 23192 Comments
Comment posted by David Sparks on May 16, 2010 at 1:29 PM
Jim:
I really like the environment (color and texture) and over-the-shoulder look at the Plover. The head seems slightly out of the plane of maximal focus, but this plover is large and DOF at f5.7 is probably a little small for the bird at this angle. Neat American Golden Plover shot. :toast:
Registered on May 26, 2007, 290 Posts, 4270 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Ditch on May 16, 2010 at 1:33 PM
I like this as posted, including the side light that adds depth to the image. Sharpness is acceptable overall, with just a bit more DOF needed for the head to be critically sharp as well as the back.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1031 Posts, 12705 Comments
Comment posted by Pat Sampson on May 16, 2010 at 3:33 PM
I like this as posted Jim. love your pov on the bird and it's pose.

Pat
Registered on May 19, 2007, 953 Posts, 15989 Comments
Comment posted by Michael Twaddell on May 16, 2010 at 4:18 PM
Any nittin on this would be pretty nit picky! Ok, maybe one more click of sharpness on the head. :wink: Actually, if you look at the blades of grass, you will see exactly where your DOF is in this photo. It looks to me like the focus was on the birds tail, as the DOF seems to fade towards the head. Excellent photo, regardless.
Registered on August 16, 2007, 199 Posts, 2132 Comments
Comment posted by Mia McPherson on May 16, 2010 at 6:23 PM
Jim,

This image does look sharper than your recent posts so I think resetting the camera to default and cleaning the contacts was a good thing.

I may have bumped my ISO up some for a touch more shutter speed, then used f7.1 to f8 for aperture to bring the entire bird into the dof. I believe the head isn't quite as sharp as the body because of the dof used. For web presentation I might do just a little more selective sharpening of the head for this image.

I love your low angle and how it makes me feel I am in the bird's world on their level, I also feel like I could be laying on my belly right next to you because of the low angle, and that makes me feel right at "home". The grasses and bird's coloration work marvelous together and the warm side light is just perfect for a bird called "golden" plover.

This is one of your best images imo and I'd be happy with it in my files.
Registered on June 25, 2007, 491 Posts, 12566 Comments
Comment posted by Ron Dudley on May 16, 2010 at 9:25 PM
Richard said it best for me and I agree exactly with his comment, esp on the positives of side light. I'd be proud to have this image in my files Jim.
Registered on March 30, 2007, 437 Posts, 10915 Comments