Slice of Life 2 REPOST

Gallery: LandscapePosted May 6, 2010186 views8 comments

Another in a series of micro climate shots from the verdant green North Cascades.

SONY a900
Remote release @ 2 second delay to lock mirror
80-200 F2.8 G
Gitzo tripod
Angle view finder
CPL
ISO 200
F20 @ 0.4"

Tim
Concrete, WA

Comments

8 comments

Comment posted by Kris Johnson on May 6, 2010 at 5:07 PM

It is interesting. I like the composition but the the exposure seems rather dark to me. The contrast also looks flat. But other than that a very nice image.

Registered on March 6, 2010, 26 Posts, 299 Comments

Comment posted by Rudy Ruberti on May 6, 2010 at 6:10 PM

Very nice scene, Tim. I agree that some more contrast might help. Also, I would try to bring out the highlights in the water a little more.

Registered on October 28, 2008, 179 Posts, 1875 Comments

Comment posted by Kenn Leonhardt on May 6, 2010 at 7:59 PM

Yep, the repost is better. Might want to ease off on the saturation a little.

Registered on March 29, 2008, 27 Posts, 1710 Comments

Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on May 7, 2010 at 12:21 AM

I like the variety in this scene. The water seems a bit gray and magenta, though. Working it more white would enhance this element in the scene I think.

Registered on November 1, 2003, 364 Posts, 22328 Comments

Comment posted by Angela Classen on May 7, 2010 at 10:47 AM

I really like the composition, and there are a lot of nice details. The water looks "off" for whatever reason. The color seems strange. Fix that, and you'll have a winner.

Registered on June 13, 2007, 434 Posts, 2742 Comments

Comment posted by Laura Stafford on May 7, 2010 at 10:49 AM

I like how the lush green vegetation frames the waterfall. Very beautiful. I don't get to see this much green living in Arizona

Laura Stafford

Registered on November 3, 2009, 52 Posts, 375 Comments

Comment posted by Timothy F. Hale on May 7, 2010 at 12:14 PM

I tried to get some of the color out of the water. Any better?

Tim

Registered on December 10, 2003, 282 Posts, 405 Comments

Comment posted by John Mumaw on May 7, 2010 at 4:04 PM

The water is still grey.
This has a lot of potential, but the postprocessing leaves an awful lot to be desired.
Is your monitor calibrated?

Registered on September 9, 2005, 62 Posts, 2289 Comments