Gallery: FloraPosted April 24, 201032 views6 comments
Jewelweed (Impatiens capensis)
D200
180mm macro w/extension
ISO 100, f5.6, 1/250
Charles
Dushore, Pa.
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6 comments
Comment posted by Carol Hyman on April 25, 2010 at 11:42 AM
Charles, I think your exposure is perfect. I also would like to see that pink flower really pop out. At the moment, the values of the colors (green and pink) are very similar.
Carol
Registered on January 18, 2007, 597 Posts, 8062 Comments
Comment posted by Charles Younger on April 25, 2010 at 12:40 PM
To me the flower appears primarily orange, Carol. I'm not sure why it should look pink to you. The diagonal line from the bright grass in the lower left to the deeper orange flower in the upper right marks the edge of a curved surface separating the foreground from the background. The simple green, brown and orange palette, I think, helps to keep the elements apart. With all the highlights it could look really confused. It's also, per the title, a bit of a comment about the difficulty I've had shooting these since they respond to even the slightest breeze.
Registered on January 15, 2010, 151 Posts, 269 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Fach on April 25, 2010 at 2:40 PM
Charles: I like the comp here better than the earlier post. I'm not sure about the grass in the LLC. Because it is relatively bright it does pull my eye a bit. I like your DOF choice and overall comp. >=))>
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1805 Posts, 26981 Comments
Comment posted by Charles Younger on April 25, 2010 at 5:32 PM
The grass is pulling down on the plant. It's late summer, September, and past its prime. It resists, but this is just a snapshot.
Registered on January 15, 2010, 151 Posts, 269 Comments
Comment posted by Catherine Reilly on April 26, 2010 at 4:06 AM
Would like to see a tighter comp on this flower. Too much else going on.
Registered on August 16, 2006, 603 Posts, 9192 Comments
Comment posted by Phil Pogledich on April 26, 2010 at 9:07 AM
I agree with Catherine about wanting a tighter comp, particularly to eliminate the grass that sneaks in from the lower left. It's an interesting capture otherwise, but I can't help but want to get a little closer to the subject.
Registered on August 24, 2009, 123 Posts, 3099 Comments
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