Gallery: LandscapePosted March 18, 2010464 views15 comments
Location : Semeti Beach Lombok Indonesia
Shoot using Canon 1Ds Mk III + 16-35mkII + GND .9 lens @16 mm, 3.2 s, f/13, ISO 100
Please give me critics to improve my technique.
Thank you.
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15 comments
Comment posted by Jeremy Kessler on March 18, 2010 at 11:21 PM
wow that looks like an intensly beautiful sunset, some people might not like the blown highlights but I really don't mind. I do think I might like a small crop up from the bottom. Its a beautiful image, well done
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Comment posted by Ken Johnson on March 19, 2010 at 12:14 AM
Fadil, Beautiful shot. Love the color DOF Great job. I wish I lived were I could get a picture like this.
Registered on March 7, 2010, 71 Posts, 272 Comments
Comment posted by Dietrich Gloger on March 19, 2010 at 1:14 AM
"Fire" and "Lava" were my first associations with this image. I think it is very very well captured. I do not mind the "hot" (blown ot highlights) of the sky - the fit the "fire" theme, but I think you could try to bring in some detail into the white area in the water.
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Comment posted by Steve Sieren on March 19, 2010 at 1:33 AM
I've always loved the pit depth composition, nice work Fadil.
SS
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Comment posted by Giovanni Allievi on March 19, 2010 at 3:08 AM
Hi Fadil,
very nice scene and I think you nailed down the exposure just right.
Giovanni
Registered on March 26, 2008, 87 Posts, 379 Comments
Comment posted by Jay Nielsen on March 19, 2010 at 4:29 AM
Beautiful water action everywhere you look and the colors are fantastic!
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Comment posted by Reed Bowman on March 19, 2010 at 8:01 AM
Spectacular light. I agree that a small crop from the bottom and maybe toned down a few highlights in the water might improve what is an already outstanding image. I love the light reflecting off the rocks and the great sense of perspective, rare for an ocean landscape
Registered on March 2, 2009, 166 Posts, 1058 Comments
Comment posted by Daman Sidhu on March 19, 2010 at 10:01 AM
Absolutely brilliant shot Fadil, i love how the orange light is getting reflected on the water from the last rays.. the sun is a bit distracting to me mainly because it takes the eye away from the beautiful fg because of its brightness. Still lovely shot overall
-Daman
Registered on December 16, 2009, 21 Posts, 176 Comments
Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on March 19, 2010 at 10:07 AM
Incredible light, Fadil. While the blown out sky is a bit troublesome, the drama of this overwhelms everything else.
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Comment posted by Mark Metternich on March 19, 2010 at 12:19 PM
Now there is some drama!!!
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Comment posted by Daniel Rappaport on March 19, 2010 at 12:26 PM
Fantastically dramatic composition, well done.
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Comment posted by Arnab Banerjee on March 19, 2010 at 5:14 PM
Great shot. You can use some multiple exposure blending to avoid blown out highlights in the sky and water - but that's minor
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Comment posted by Aaron Feinberg on March 19, 2010 at 7:35 PM
That perspective is nuts. Great job and looks pretty scary too! Comp is there...bit more post work though. Feel if you play w/ the luminance in the red you could get some more detail out of the blown areas in the fg. Also, a RGND here might have held the sky in check a bit better...or blending to maintain DR. Overall lovely shot though!
aF
Registered on October 26, 2009, 399 Posts, 2789 Comments
Comment posted by Alex Mody on March 21, 2010 at 8:16 PM
This is a very nice and angry image! I wish you hadn't blown out all of those highlights, but it still works. Good stuff!!
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Comment posted by Helio Cristovao on March 26, 2010 at 6:50 AM
This red light seems to come from another world! Great moment. The comp. itself is not singing that much to me, though I appreciate all the drama from the scene and water motion around.
Registered on September 15, 2009, 83 Posts, 434 Comments
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very nice scene and I think you nailed down the exposure just right.
Giovanni
-Daman
aF