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Beautifully Ugly
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Beautifully Ugly

by Brian Vance

Gallery: AvianPosted January 31, 2010127 views16 comments
I caught this Wood Stork a couple days ago at Anastasia State Park in Florida. This bird was wading where fisherman cast their lines hoping for a free meal. I didn't have a small fish to donate, but I did appreciate its tolerance for close proximity to humans. Comments welcome.

Comments

16 comments
Comment posted by Wayne Simpson on January 31, 2010 at 5:50 PM
Brian,
This is a great shot, however I do wish there was a little more head room. I'm sure you could clone in some background in the top of the frame (and the very bottom) and this would work even better.

Wayne
Registered on December 11, 2006, 303 Posts, 924 Comments
Comment posted by Doug Gilham on January 31, 2010 at 6:15 PM
Great shot Brian, love the reflection of the stork & the clouds in the still water. I would agree a bit more room would be nice.
Registered on September 20, 2009, 77 Posts, 489 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Ditch on January 31, 2010 at 6:17 PM
An intriguing image - almost surreal from the reflected sky. I like most things about this image and I appreciate that you included the large version with your post.

A few issues:

1. it would be nice to see the exif and other shooting parameters (focal length, cropped or not, etc.).
2. I wish this wasn't so tight on top and bottom. More space would enhance the mood here IMO.
3. I'd adjust he white balance to warm this up. The body of the stork has a strong blue bias which I assume is from being in a shaded area. If you are worried about loosing some of the "magic" of the sky reflection by warming up the image you could do the adjustment selectively on just the stork.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1031 Posts, 12705 Comments
Comment posted by Jim Harris on January 31, 2010 at 6:35 PM
wonderful image with the great reflection, I agree with whats been said however about the need for more space around the head, nicely done though :toast:
Registered on August 31, 2009, 74 Posts, 368 Comments
Comment posted by Sharon Hallowell on January 31, 2010 at 6:50 PM
Nits mentioned and Richard gave you some great advice, esp regarding the blue tint on the bird. The water and sky reflection here is fabulous and this could be a great image with just a little work. Got me longing for blue skies and warm water! Sharon
Registered on November 1, 2003, 392 Posts, 4810 Comments
Comment posted by Brian Vance on January 31, 2010 at 7:16 PM
Thanks for the comments, they are very much appreciated.

Richard, the techs are:
canon 40D
100-400 L @100
1/320 @f6.3
ISO 400
fill flash, tripod, kneepads, etc.

This is full frame, no crop. If I had cropped, I could recover some of the tighness, but I guess I have to learn how to add BG in Ps. I tried to warm up the image globally, but the reflections lost ground. Can anyone direct me to an easy tutorial on how to warm up the bird while keeping the BG intact?

Thanks, I really appreciate the feedback,

Brian
Registered on October 31, 2008, 26 Posts, 136 Comments
Comment posted by Wayne Willison on January 31, 2010 at 8:03 PM
Brian, very nice image of the stork and of course the bg is killer. This may have benefited from a vertical shoot instead of the horizontal. But in any case it's lovely.
To warm the subject and not the bg, you could make a mask in PS.
Registered on April 10, 2009, 292 Posts, 3967 Comments
Comment posted by Craig Strand on January 31, 2010 at 8:06 PM
Great comp. and beautiful cloud reflected water. Adjusting the nits mentioned adding a tad more room top and bottom would really add to this shot.
Registered on March 30, 2008, 416 Posts, 2885 Comments
Comment posted by Ed Dubois on January 31, 2010 at 8:37 PM
I like this effect very much Brian. Like several others have said a little more space would be nice.
Registered on February 22, 2005, 129 Posts, 4739 Comments
Comment posted by Nate Chappell on January 31, 2010 at 9:00 PM
It's a beautiful image but a little tight, either backing up a bit or going vertical would have put this over the top and made it fantastic. :toast:
Registered on February 1, 2006, 1158 Posts, 19528 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Ditch on January 31, 2010 at 9:04 PM
Thanks for the exif.

I've sent you a private email with some guidance on warming up just the stork.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1031 Posts, 12705 Comments
Comment posted by Simon Bennett on February 1, 2010 at 3:27 AM
Lovely image Brain - I like the reflected bird and sky.
Registered on February 4, 2007, 350 Posts, 4614 Comments
Comment posted by Ajit Huilgol on February 1, 2010 at 5:44 AM
This is a fabulous shot, Brian, it almost looks unreal! I agree it would benefit greatly with a little more headroom, though. :toast:
Registered on December 19, 2008, 302 Posts, 2055 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Jenkins on February 1, 2010 at 11:53 AM
Great reflection Brian and nice job on the whites which I often blow out.
Registered on April 20, 2008, 307 Posts, 604 Comments
Comment posted by Jim Hackley on February 1, 2010 at 3:53 PM
Wonderful tonality to this image and great job on the composition, would have been nice to have some more space top and bottom as others have said but still a very good image, nice work. Great to see the larger version.
Registered on September 17, 2009, 302 Posts, 5535 Comments
Comment posted by Mia McPherson on February 1, 2010 at 8:43 PM
Brian,

I agree with the comments made on the composition, more space all around would have truly been wonderful. I love the sky reflected on the water but agree with Rich that the bird could be warmed up some.
Registered on June 25, 2007, 491 Posts, 12566 Comments