Mangrove Magic
by Paul Marcellini
Here is one from the other night. I went out with a friend to Boca Chita, and island about 12 miles east of the mainland. These mangroves are the first thing a hurricane or storm might hit coming from the Atlantic. They are trying to grow straight into the coral and limestone rock and have been visibly stunted by these hardships.
The sky was almost clear and these clouds rolled in nicely. The lit up thunderhead gave some nice lightning in the distance later on.
I just re-calibrated to a higher ambient light to allow a brighter monitor, so I am uneasy about the newly processed stuff, but will say the sunset was on the left and a break in a wall of additional mangroves allowed the foreground to catch some sidelight.
Thanks for any comments/critiques,
Paul
5d2, 16-35
Comments
34 commentsExcept for the dark fall off on the middle vegetation, (leading my eye out, maybe a bit of dodging) , I have no complaints.
IMHO, that whole "chunk" of green mangrove in the top 1/3 could be lightened very slight to keep my eye from black holing. (in house processing term. When your eye gets stuck on a certain part of an image that you don't want your eye to get stuck on, very subjective) I would dodge it, or do this curve and brush it in with the history brush. Just a subtle lightening (small shadow end S-Curve to hold contrast). Thats all.
Feeling verbose today, I guess ...
Thanks again,
Paul
David M. Cobb
An amazingly dramatic scene, from sea to sky, well-captured. I like it very much. I am somewhat distracted by the indistinct greens in the center foreground; perhaps algae on the rocks, blurred by waves and a slow shutter? Me, I like the dark cypresses, but (alone among the many admirers of this image) don't like the fg as much.
Great shot.
Cheers,
Chris
- Dan.
The other route, which you should have, is a second monitor for color. Even if it's a $450 1680 x 1050 22". Dell, Apple, Viewsonic, NEC all have half decent ones. That price will get you 96%-98% of the Adobe 98 Gamut. The other bad thing about the imac is judging sharpness for web.
I love how you composed this shot and this is definitely your style. The fg mangrove is a nice attention grabber and of course the sky is wonderful as well. Im not sure about the lightening of the mid ground maybe something to test out for yourself. I do think it matches nicely with the dark sky.
Wonderful job and thanks for sharing
Daniel
Georg
A bit dark....perhaps....comp is super! Love the isolated mangrove and the sky is killer!